This song I wrote

[supersloth]

hey, i posted some of my music here a few months ago and got some awesome feedback! i just posted this new song on my website called "This Isn't The End". Its a kind of a weird song, and i'm really curious what people are going to think about it. So if you listen to it tell me whether you liked it or not. if you have any suggestions on things i need to work on shoot that my way too. i really want to get better.

site = http://www.davidvossel.com

thanks again!!
~ss

 

[siameseplease]

Sounds real good.

 

[phatj]

me gusta mucho

 

[Alienwho]

Nice job, sounds good man. I even came in here ready to be honest and rip you a new one.

If you ever put that stuff up for download let me know.

 

[thirdeye]

Sounds good. Not something I'd normally listen to but I would listen to it.

 

[NanoStuff]

Well done, but you seriously need to consider investing in a better microphone to do you justice

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: NanoStuff
Well done, but you seriously need to consider investing in a better microphone to do you justice

yea no joke, my mic sucks and i only have one . if i had some cash i'd try and get a BLUE mic i hear they're pretty sweet. do you have any mic suggestions for under $1000 bucks?

 

[E equals MC2]

I Love Farewell.

Very unique. A nice stereo mix..!

 

[HeroOfPellinor]

Very very nice! I probably wouldn't listen to it again because it was a bit repetitive during the first 2/3. I almost think you could lose that everpresent rolling guitar for a brief period at some point to break it up, but since you're the guy who makes great music and I'm not, take that FWIW.

 

[NanoStuff]

Originally posted by: supersloth

Originally posted by: NanoStuff
Well done, but you seriously need to consider investing in a better microphone to do you justice

yea no joke, my mic sucks and i only have one . if i had some cash i'd try and get a BLUE mic i hear they're pretty sweet. do you have any mic suggestions for under $1000 bucks?

Oooh no, sorry. But there's lots of forums for just that kind of stuff

I'm only familiar with the Shure SM58 as being a great value on the budget side, but for $1000 you can do a shitload better.

 

[Xonoahbin]

Very good. Too bad the music I make doesn't fit with that type of instrumental

 

[Fritzo]

That's not bad at all! The singer has a Bryan Adams thing going on Very smooth, well mixed, very good!

 

[ModeEngage]

I think your mixing need to put a little more emphasis on your vocals, I think they get drowned out a bit by the instrumental.

Other than that, awesome stuff, I'd buy a CD

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: Fritzo
That's not bad at all! The singer has a Bryan Adams thing going on Very smooth, well mixed, very good!

i sound like Bryan Adams!?

 

[Radical Ans]

Sounds good. What are you using for an audio interface?

 

[supersloth]

m-audio duo is my analog to digital converter
art mpa gold is my tube preamp

 

[Alienwho]

What would be my best bet (meaning free and/or super cheap) way of recording some stuff on my computer? I've got a couple of songs I want to record and send as mp3's to my brother. I tried last night just using a webcam as the mic but it had this super obnoxious buzzing noise. I don't care about super quality, just something that works.

 

[supersloth]

just buy a computer mic and plug it into your soundcard i guess. thats what i do to get ideas down.

 

[Alienwho]

Originally posted by: supersloth
just buy a computer mic and plug it into your soundcard i guess. thats what i do to get ideas down.

Yeah I guess i'll have to do that.

Also I wouldn't say your voice sounds like Bryan Adams. You have more of a Trust Company sound going on.

And hey, where'd the rest of the songs on your website go? I wanted to listen to all of them today at work.

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: Alienwho

Originally posted by: supersloth
just buy a computer mic and plug it into your soundcard i guess. thats what i do to get ideas down.

Yeah I guess i'll have to do that.

Also I wouldn't say your voice sounds like Bryan Adams. You have more of a Trust Company sound going on.

And hey, where'd the rest of the songs on your website go? I wanted to listen to all of them today at work.

i'm doing some construction on the site, and making a new player for all of my old stuff. check back in a few days.

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: Alienwho
Nice job, sounds good man. I even came in here ready to be honest and rip you a new one.
If you ever put that stuff up for download let me know.

 

[SWScorch]

very impressive dude. I'm a metalhead but I like this stuff

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: SWScorch
very impressive dude. I'm a metalhead but I like this stuff

yea its weird, i write all this acoustic stuff, but when i listen to other people its usually pretty heavy.

 

[Rufus12]

When are you gonna get this available for download or purchase? It's that good.

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: Rufus12
When are you gonna get this available for download or purchase? It's that good.

thanks!! once i'm happy with the mixes i may put them up for download. after i get a few more songs i'm proud of i'll probably sell an EP album to help raise funds to do a full length one. then hopefully a lable will snag me somewhere along away to help out in marketing.

~ss