The time has come

[Philosopher]

The time has come.
Fortunes play, grating down on my foray.
Goodbye the moontide shallow deep.
Into heavens gate I steep,
my lonely soul down gray face shallows.
The dark pool abiding,
howls.

 

[Scrapster]

don't mind me. just passing through.

 

[JayPatel]

i thought u had Geforce III info when i read the topic.

 

[Philosopher]

Forget not me
in absence
wake
yourself to blunders
an old mistake
cherish nighttime
continuance
forget not me
nor let me wilt

 

[lilstevo]

and this has been another session of philosopher's poetry corner...

 

[Philosopher]

Endless rimming through the ear
contineering from your gear
I ate the poptarts.
But they weren't here.

 

[JayPatel]

it had the makings of a good poem till u threw in that PopTart bit.

 

[Philosopher]

lol

hmmm...maybe I can fix it....

Endless rimming through the ear
contineering from your gear

....nope. I took out the poptarts, but I can't think of what to replace em with. Help me out here, guys!

 

[Philosopher]

Poetry pain back ingrain the line that slices red flashing gain.

 

[ChrichtonsGirl]

Not to intrude on your little poetry session here, but



<< Endless rimming through the ear >>



Why are you rimming somebody's ear?

 

[Rio Rebel]

I remember that Plato wasn't too fond of poets.

 

[Philosopher]

Endless rimming through the ear
contineering from your gear
slyly opening hot desire
chomping on the crunchy fire

-----

hows that?

 

[Bluga]

sorry but i don't any of the sentences you wrote

 

[Philosopher]

); rethie meht dnatsrednu t'ndid I

 

[Philosopher]

trains planes and automobiles

 

[Asha'man]

what?

 

[brandc]

So tell me
O' Philosopher
Is there an ode to a commode
In your fertile mind?

 

[Philosopher]

There ain't no such thing as no ode in my book. 'specially to no commode.

 

[Philosopher]

Western bloom, sit by dove
white sinner gloom
in dove we hope

 

[Philosopher]

Well, it annoys the heck out of me that my dorm doesn't have highspeed internet! Which means I'm relegated to these damn school computers for downloading. I have a bunch of dbz eps I can't watch cause these comps don't have realplayer, and it won't let me install it! grrrr.

 

[Mesomorph]

Philosopher, that's awesome stuff man. But hey, you want to be a good poet (and i'm speaking from very little experience in poetry but as a journalist and essayist). Drop flowerly language and vague imagery to make a point. solidify imagery towards a purpose

 

[Philosopher]

Candy cane
red stripes down back
the tigers hips slowly girate
eyes on the empty wrappings

 

[Soybomb]

Didn't you get a timeout for neffing or something not too long ago?

 

[Philosopher]

no, but you may be reffering to this.

 

[Philosopher]

How far would this fish swim,
if the water was green?