thanks. got the help that i needed

[imported_LoKe]

Originally posted by: unarmdragon
thanks for your help guys! 🙂 i think i know what my sentence is gonna be. this is for my thesis btw. i know its a poor thesis, but thats the best i can do.

Which sentence did you choose?

 

[The Pentium Guy]

Originally posted by: Mrvile

Originally posted by: unarmdragon
does this sentence make any sense? and is the grammar correct? if not, can someone help me reword it to make it correct? i need it to be one sentence. i can't separate it into two sentence.

Although credit cards are capable of being beneficial, they can also be disastrous; thus asking the question ?Is Credit Card a Friend or Foe??

"Is a Credit Card a Friend or Fow?"

Neither. A credit card is an object. Besides, Fow isn't a word.

 

[unarmdragon]

Originally posted by: LoKe

Originally posted by: unarmdragon
thanks for your help guys! 🙂 i think i know what my sentence is gonna be. this is for my thesis btw. i know its a poor thesis, but thats the best i can do.

Which sentence did you choose?

Although credit cards are capable of being beneficial, they can also be disastrous; thus raising the question : ?Is Credit Card a Friend or Foe??

thanks 🙂

 

[imported_LoKe]

Score!

 

[The Pentium Guy]

You better get an A+ with all that help we gave you.... or ELSE!
[btw - what'd you argue in your essay? Friend or foe? err... "Friend or FOW"]

 

[KLin]

Originally posted by: unarmdragon

Originally posted by: LoKe

Originally posted by: unarmdragon
thanks for your help guys! 🙂 i think i know what my sentence is gonna be. this is for my thesis btw. i know its a poor thesis, but thats the best i can do.

Which sentence did you choose?

Although credit cards are capable of being beneficial, they can also be disastrous; thus raising the question : ?Is Credit Card a Friend or Foe??

thanks 🙂

Good luck with that bad grammar.

 

[unarmdragon]

Originally posted by: The Pentium Guy
You better get an A+ with all that help we gave you.... or ELSE!
[btw - what'd you argue in your essay? Friend or foe? err... "Friend or FOW"]

friend if the user can be responsible.

 

[The Pentium Guy]

Good luck man.

 

[damonpip]

?Is Credit Card a Friend or Foe?? really does not make sense. Either "Is the Credit Card a Friend or Foe?" or "Are Credit Cards friends or foes?" would be better.

 

[Elderly Newt]

not sure if someone already said something like this, but:

Credit cards can be both benefical and disatrous, thus raising the question "Are credit cards friends or foes?"

But you said this is a thesis, right? I think you should take a more of a stance on the issue at hand - a thesis is supposed to be an opinion statement that you support with evidence. To me, your sentence seems more along the lines of a question or prompt you'd be presented with in order to come up with a thesis.

 

[The Pentium Guy]

We should write his essay for him

 

[RossMAN]

Replace with:

Credit cards are bad, m'kay?

WINNAR 🙂

 

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