Originally posted by: AgentEL
I would say email as soon as you can while they still remember you.
Originally posted by: z0mb13
Hey guys how is this??:
Dear XXXXX,
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me, and also to ask my questions. I really learned a lot about the mortgage banking industry.
I look forward to hear from you. I hope that I would be a good match for the position. Have fun on your trip!
Sincerely,
XXXXXX
Originally posted by: z0mb13
Hey guys how is this??:
Dear XXXXX,
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me, and also to ask my questions. I really learned a lot about the mortgage banking industry.
I look forward to hear from you. I hope that I would be a good match for the position. Have fun on your trip!
Sincerely,
XXXXXX
Originally posted by: Kyteland
Originally posted by: z0mb13
Hey guys how is this??:
Dear XXXXX,
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me, and also to ask my questions. I really learned a lot about the mortgage banking industry.
I look forward to hear from you. I hope that I would be a good match for the position. Have fun on your trip!
Sincerely,
XXXXXX
You start every sentance but the last with the same word: "I". It makes your letter sound like the focus is you instead of the interviewer. Reword it.
Originally posted by: z0mb13
Hows this one folks?
Dear Mr. XXXXXX,
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me, and also to ask my questions. From our conversation, I gained a lot of knowledge of the mortgage banking industry.
I look forward to hear from you. I believe that I would be a good match for the position. Have fun on your trip!
Sincerely,
XXXXX
Originally posted by: Kyteland
Originally posted by: z0mb13
Hows this one folks?
Dear Mr. XXXXXX,
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me, and also to ask my questions. From our conversation, I gained a lot of knowledge of the mortgage banking industry.
I look forward to hear from you. I believe that I would be a good match for the position. Have fun on your trip!
Sincerely,
XXXXX
Here is another thing that needs rewording. When you break that sentence up it is stating this: I really appreciate your time and your willingness to interview me. I really appreciate your time and your willingness to ask my questions.
That makes no sense. To me it sounds like you are thanking him for asking questions for you. Are you thanking him for allowing you to ask questions, or for him answering your questions? Make that a little clearer. You probably shoudn't thank him for letting you ask the questions (they are supposed to do that, right?) but instead for his good answers to them.
I would like to thank you for your time meeting me today.
Originally posted by: z0mb13
sweet I am a CAL graduate too!
I hate it that their career center is so far away from central campus