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Sorry for the long absence, but i'm BACK!!

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Cheetara

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Hi guys!!! It's been a while since I posted, but I wanted to say that i'm back and the poetry juices are a-flowin' again!!

Much love to you all! Here's my latest, about common day occurrences - enjoy!



It seems like an eternity
Since you went inside.
Click, the door shut.
And you had your salvation.
While I,
I burnt and wept and writhed.
Hoping I could hold myself together, waiting for you.
The pain you gave me seemed for a moment, unbearable, uncontainable.
And then, my wait was rewarded.
There you were, a picture of calm, as unruffled as the ocean on a sunny day.
And it was my turn
To attain salvation.
 
Originally posted by: Cheetara
I was inspired to write this poem as I waited in line for the bathroom.
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I came into this thread all set and ready to ridicule a noob, but by golly that was a pretty good poem in light of its inspiration.

Kudos.
 
Originally posted by: NuclearNed
Originally posted by: Cheetara
I was inspired to write this poem as I waited in line for the bathroom.
Click to expand...

I came into this thread all set and ready to ridicule a noob, but by golly that was a pretty good poem in light of its inspiration.

Kudos.
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Same.

Was itching to rip into a rhyming noob poem.
 
I thought that poem was a bit of a whinging emo rant... then You told us your inspiration, and suddenly its genius!

Good work!
 
Originally posted by: Cheetara
Hi guys!!! It's been a while since I posted, but I wanted to say that i'm back and the poetry juices are a-flowin' again!!

Much love to you all! Here's my latest, about common day occurrences - enjoy!



It seems like an eternity
Since you went inside.
Click, the door shut.
And you had your salvation.
While I,
I burnt and wept and writhed.
Hoping I could hold myself together, waiting for you.
The pain you gave me seemed for a moment, unbearable, uncontainable.
And then, my wait was rewarded.
There you were, a picture of calm, as unruffled as the ocean on a sunny day.
And it was my turn
To attain salvation.
Click to expand...

Is this from the Bible, John 3:16? or was it Paul 4:20?
 
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