One Last Time!! Resume Help/Suggestions!!

krwell

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Hey guys you helped me before. I made a bunch of changes and need any last suggestions and opinions. Again I'm 22 and just graduated college. The job I was suppose to have fell through due to the recent down in the computer/technology industry. So I'm out on the job hunt. I have no real experience and looking for that first real job to get experience. So all the help and suggestions you give will be most appreciative. Thanks in advance.


RESUME

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nd

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Some grammatical observations:

OBJECTIVE: To use my skills in Computer Science, Mathematics, and/or Business Administration to meet any challenges and help the company succeeded in every aspect.

That should be "succeed". You should probably omit the "in every aspect" part also, since it's a little wordy.
 

nd

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I recommend listing your education BEFORE your certifications. Just an image thing.

BTW, I'm only 20 years old and have never written a resume myself.. but I don't think my comments are unreasonable :)
 

br0wn

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I will give you some pointers in writing resume. I'm no expert, but
I have written some resumes that landed me great jobs.
Please be warn that my critics might sound a bit harsh. So if you don't
like it, just ignore it.

First, you resume should have a CONCRETE goal (put into your objective).
Your current objective is too broad and vaque. It is tricky to write
a good objective. You don't want to write a too specific objective that
will throw you out from an opportunity nor do you want to write something
very broad.



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OBJECTIVE: To use my skills in Computer Science, Mathematics, and/or Business Administration to meet any challenges and help the company succeeded in every aspect.
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Too broad.
Suggestion: Research the company that you are applying for and design your
objective to meet their needs.



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CERTIFICATIONS: CompTIA A+ Certification, Microsoft Certified System Engineer NT 4.0
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Unneeded. You have a B.S. in Computer Science. Your education should be emphasized
instead of your certifications (of course unless you are looking to work in a company
that specifically states these certifications' requirements.



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EDUCATION:

WESTERN WASHINGTON UNIVERSITY Graduation June 2001

Bellingham, Washington

President?s Scholarship

Major: BS in Computer Science and Mathematics

Minor: Business Administration

Grade Point Average: 3.2, 218 credit hours completed

Activities: Tutor Mathematics and Computer Science students

Relevant Course Work: Computer Programming I in C++, Computer Programming II in C++,

Discrete Structures and Function Programming I,

Discrete Structures and Function Programming II, Data Structures, Web Scripting,

Software Engineering, Linear Optimization, Nonlinear Optimization,

Ten other 100-400 Level Mathematics Classes
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This part is messy.
Here some suggestion to clean it up:

EDUCATION:
WESTERN WASHINGTON UNIVERSITY, Bellingham, Washington
Bachelor of Science, Computer Science and Mathematics (Minor: Business Administration), June 2001
GPA: 3.2/4.0

RELEVANT COURSES:
- Web Scripting
- Software Engineering
- Linear Optimization
- Nonlinear Optimization

I suggest that you only list some ADVANCED courses though.
With a B.S. in CS, most ppls will expect that you know data
structures, computer programming, data structures and all
the introductory courses.
Put your activities under WORK EXPERIENCES.



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WORK EXPERIENCE:

Paladin Data System June 2000 ? Sept 2000

19472 Powder Hill Place NE

Poulsbo, Washington 98370

Phone: (800) 532-8448

Summer Hire

VP of Business Development: Curt Ueda VP of Operations: Jay Morrow

June ? September 2000.

Duties: Document work, designed and developed Oracle databases, created library database application and

front end, and tested software
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You don't have to list who is VP of Business Development or VP of Operations, they can
be your references. Don't list phone number.
Put your job title there. Something like &quot;Database Engineer III, Summer Intern&quot;.



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Fred Meyer Grocery Store June 1998 ? Sept 1998

5050 State Highway 303 NE June 1999 ? Sept 1999

Bremerton, Washington 98311

Phone: (360) 792-2800

Grocery Helper Clerk and Produce Helper Clerk

Grocery Manager: Rick Vance Produce Manager: Dan Stockton

December 1999. June ? September 1999. December, 1998. June ? September 1998.

Duties: Assisted customers, stocked grocery shelves, cleaned produce and stocked produce displays.
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Don't have to list names here. Don't list phone number.



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REFERENCES: Provided upon request
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Isn't it obvious. This line can be taken out.

You don't have many things in your resume. List some of your interesting
COURSE WORK PROJECTS.
List some SKILLS like:

SKILLS:
Programming: C, C++, Java, Fortran, bla bla bla
Systems: Windows 9x/2K, Unix, Linux, ....

If you have some ADVANCED SKILLS, list them. Be selective though.
Basically, TAILOR your resume to meet what the company need.

If the company is looking for a Systems Engineer, listing your knowledge
in graphics has no value to them. However, listing your experience in
your Operation System course or Compiler course have GREAT VALUE.

Anyway, good luck on your job search.



 

nd

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brown.. i agree with pretty much everything you said.. but I didn't want to type that much.
 

ElFenix

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you have 218 hours! my god! and here i thought i was a stud with 160 some!
 

krwell

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yea I busted my ass in college to get done in 4 years with that major and minor
 

dew042

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figure out a layout design. raw text is not pretty. granted, your skills make you very attractive, but a well layed out resume that looks good makes ppl take notice....

dew.
 

DietDrThunder

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Are you willing to relocate? Are you willing to work for a defense contractor? We are hiring College grads like crazy down here? The only thing I'd add would be some brief information on the type of class projects you worked on. If your interested, send me a copy?
 

TheAvenger

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The &quot;and/or&quot; needs to go just make it &quot;and&quot; you come as a package not with options like carrots and/or fries, if they don't take you cause you are too smart, they are sinking anyways...