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It's 2 pages. This one and next in the album.
http://picasaweb.google.com/ni...to#5093754116332229874
Thanks,
N.
http://picasaweb.google.com/ni...to#5093754116332229874
Thanks,
N.
Originally posted by: Nithin
Could you elaborate? Grammar? Words?
Originally posted by: Zolty
Originally posted by: Nithin
Could you elaborate? Grammar? Words?
It isn't funny, you make a microsoft joke, and a fairly unoriginal one at that. I am not saying I can do better, but you might want to look for a writer to help out w/ the words.
Originally posted by: Zolty
Originally posted by: Nithin
Could you elaborate? Grammar? Words?
It isn't funny, you make a microsoft joke, and a fairly unoriginal one at that. I am not saying I can do better, but you might want to look for a writer to help out w/ the words.
Originally posted by: MisterJackson
not a tough crowd, just a not gonna bull shit ya crowd. Writing's lame, artwork is decent. With work I think you've got a lot of potential.
Originally posted by: Mo0o
well your drawing is certainly better than my stick figures http://eckliptic.atothosting.com/terryyoung.png
Originally posted by: So
Your art isn't bad, but you desperately need to work on your writing...
Originally posted by: Nithin
Originally posted by: Mo0o
well your drawing is certainly better than my stick figures http://eckliptic.atothosting.com/terryyoung.png
but being real life, that was funny.
Originally posted by: Nithin
Originally posted by: MisterJackson
not a tough crowd, just a not gonna bull shit ya crowd. Writing's lame, artwork is decent. With work I think you've got a lot of potential.
ya, i understand. which is good, i know what i need to work on.
Originally posted by: Nithin
sure. if you have any good joke ideas, let me know. i'll try to draw it.
Originally posted by: Nithin
Originally posted by: Zolty
Originally posted by: Nithin
Could you elaborate? Grammar? Words?
It isn't funny, you make a microsoft joke, and a fairly unoriginal one at that. I am not saying I can do better, but you might want to look for a writer to help out w/ the words.
it's also that the kidnappers use MS Software to plot Bill Gates' kidnapping. Which I thought was funny. Hehe.
Originally posted by: Tizyler
Originally posted by: Nithin
Originally posted by: Zolty
Originally posted by: Nithin
Could you elaborate? Grammar? Words?
It isn't funny, you make a microsoft joke, and a fairly unoriginal one at that. I am not saying I can do better, but you might want to look for a writer to help out w/ the words.
it's also that the kidnappers use MS Software to plot Bill Gates' kidnapping. Which I thought was funny. Hehe.
The irony in that is actually funny, but I don't think it really stands out in your comic because they don't look like kidnappers. They are dressed in suits/business atire, so you kind of expect them to be using Office. If they were dressed up like scrubs (kidnappers), I think it would be more ironic that the software wasn't working.
Originally posted by: Phokus
Dear Nithin,
You obviously have talent as an artist but your writing is lacking. I, on the other hand, am a genius at humor with no artistic talent. I say we team up and together we can rule the world!
I picked up on it right away. It worked for me.Originally posted by: Nithin
i was trying to draw a mafia don, but didn't manage to actually make him look like one.
Originally posted by: Quasmo
I liked your first one.