- Jan 15, 2001
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edit2: just one quick note...if you have something particulary negative to say...just save it. i am not stupid, and my writing skills are not reflected by this poem. dont take it out of context. it is meant to be silly, not rhyme, and just reflect some of the memories i have shared with her over the last few years. if you have a problem with that, cool, and if you must say it, fine, but try to contain yourselves. i posted it for people to get some laughs, not to point and criticise.
ok, so i got bored and i was thinking about my girlfriend. i love her so much, but i suck at poems, so its hard to write them and not have her laugh. anyways, i got over that and i figured i would write a really stupid one.
it contains a lot of inside jokes, and no she doesnt fart EDIT: ok, she farts, but HARDLY EVER - and it is followed by a little giggle...she just thinks it is funny when i do it. her mom loves me now and treats me like i am her favorite person in the whole world (edit: yeah, i dunno why, but she really does). i know the rhyming scheme is absolutely retarded so dont comment on it. i just threw some thoughts together and it happened to read ok in stanzas. it is odd because it has half rhyme and ABAB once or twice, but most of it is ABCD. anyway, read it and laugh at me. that is the point of this.
our relationship is awesome because she will walk up and tell me how much she loves me but i really need to work on my poem skills. she is charming i tell you.
LAUGH IT UP! :beer:
It started almost three years ago
When I just got glimpse of your face
Your white teeth and your curly hair
I wondered what color was your underwear
As time passed and school let out
I tried to get your attention
Hoping you would become interested
And soon enough we were watching movies on the couch
I said the most badass one liner
While we were sitting in your car
And then of course you went on vacation
but when you got back it was love from the start
months went by and i got so attached
I cant think of a moment when you weren?t on my mind
Even though your mom started to hate me
It was ok because I still loved you
Fast forward to today and the fire is still hot
I cant go a minute without wanting to hug you
The smell of your skin and the curls in your hair
I still wonder what color is your underwear
I love you so much and I hope you realize that
Sometimes I wish we would never be apart
But you know what would happen if we were never separated
we would stay in bed all day and laugh about farts
I wish you would take up computers as a hobby
It could be something we would have in common
But I can forget it and just stick to watching porn
You seem to enjoy that and it doesn?t bother me at all
I guess what I wanted to say
Is that you are so awesome and special to me
If you ever want to just talk and sit together
You know who to go to because I will always be there for you
edit: i have no formal training and i have no regrets. that was the best that i can do! *chuckle*
ok, so i got bored and i was thinking about my girlfriend. i love her so much, but i suck at poems, so its hard to write them and not have her laugh. anyways, i got over that and i figured i would write a really stupid one.
it contains a lot of inside jokes, and no she doesnt fart EDIT: ok, she farts, but HARDLY EVER - and it is followed by a little giggle...she just thinks it is funny when i do it. her mom loves me now and treats me like i am her favorite person in the whole world (edit: yeah, i dunno why, but she really does). i know the rhyming scheme is absolutely retarded so dont comment on it. i just threw some thoughts together and it happened to read ok in stanzas. it is odd because it has half rhyme and ABAB once or twice, but most of it is ABCD. anyway, read it and laugh at me. that is the point of this.
our relationship is awesome because she will walk up and tell me how much she loves me but i really need to work on my poem skills. she is charming i tell you.
LAUGH IT UP! :beer:
It started almost three years ago
When I just got glimpse of your face
Your white teeth and your curly hair
I wondered what color was your underwear
As time passed and school let out
I tried to get your attention
Hoping you would become interested
And soon enough we were watching movies on the couch
I said the most badass one liner
While we were sitting in your car
And then of course you went on vacation
but when you got back it was love from the start
months went by and i got so attached
I cant think of a moment when you weren?t on my mind
Even though your mom started to hate me
It was ok because I still loved you
Fast forward to today and the fire is still hot
I cant go a minute without wanting to hug you
The smell of your skin and the curls in your hair
I still wonder what color is your underwear
I love you so much and I hope you realize that
Sometimes I wish we would never be apart
But you know what would happen if we were never separated
we would stay in bed all day and laugh about farts
I wish you would take up computers as a hobby
It could be something we would have in common
But I can forget it and just stick to watching porn
You seem to enjoy that and it doesn?t bother me at all
I guess what I wanted to say
Is that you are so awesome and special to me
If you ever want to just talk and sit together
You know who to go to because I will always be there for you
edit: i have no formal training and i have no regrets. that was the best that i can do! *chuckle*
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