Is this sentence correct?

[GreenGhost]

"The soils turn to clays as moving to the south part of the watershed"

I'm revising a text for a friend; the 'as moving to' part sounds strange to me. It's technical so we can change simply to 'as we move to ...'

Suggestions?

Thx

 

[Cattlegod]

it makes no sense, i'd delete the line totally.

"As we move to the south end of the watershed, the soil turns to clay."

 

[myjaja]

Originally posted by: GreenGhost
"The, soils, turn, to, clays, as moving, to the, south part, of the, watershed"

I'm revising a text for a friend; the 'as moving to' part sounds strange to me. It's technical so we can change simply to 'as we move to ...'

Suggestions?

Thx

Fixed

 

[Noirish]

Originally posted by: GreenGhost
"The soils turn to clays as moving to the south part of the watershed"

I'm revising a text for a friend; the 'as moving to' part sounds strange to me. It's technical so we can change simply to 'as we move to ...'

Suggestions?

Thx

your suggestion is good

 

[Whoozyerdaddy]

The soils turn to clays as you move to the southern part of the watershed.

 

[imported_LoKe]

"The soil turns to clay as we move to the south part of the watershed."

Either way, it's still a stupid sentence.

 

[Modular]

As we move to the southern part of the watershed, the soils turn into clays.


FTW

 

[RichardE]

As the soil moves towards the southern part of the watershed it will form into clay.

 

[cKGunslinger]

"As we cruise to the south side of da 'shed, this here soil turns to mutha-fvcking clay!"

 

[randay]

"The soils turning to clays as while moving by the southern of the watershed"

 

[Cattlegod]

"Motha'fkin bitches in dis joint was gettin' all suck 'n sh1t in the clay as we homies be pimp limpin' to da back of the crib"

 

[dullard]

Is the soil magically transforming into clay? Or 'clays', whatever 'clays' is. Probably not. So, no that sentence isn't even physically accurate, let alone gramatically accurate. Maybe it should say the "ground transitions from soil to clay".





* Warning! I can not spell 'grammar' or 'grammer', whichever it is. I simply can't spell. So don't flame me.

 

[datalink7]

As we moved towards the rear of the watershed, the rough dirt path gave way to shiny soft clay. It's oozing textures brough a tickling delight as it squeezed through our toes.

And then, the world ended.

 

[randay]

As our panther class support scout vehicle traveled towards the southern sector of the Watershed nuclear weapons facility, the Anu'udrian mothership began transforming the soil under the facility into clay using its giant molecular-reassembly array; Time was running out.

 

[nakedfrog]

The sentence below this one is false.
The sentence above this one is true.

 

[dullard]

Originally posted by: nakedfrog
The sentence below this one is false.
The sentence above this one is true.
"Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so." - Ford Prefect

So you are saying that it is false that time is an illusion? Then you back it up saying that it is true that time is not an illusion?

 

[nakedfrog]

Originally posted by: dullard

Originally posted by: nakedfrog
The sentence below this one is false.
The sentence above this one is true.
"Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so." - Ford Prefect

So you are saying that it is false that time is an illusion? Then you back it up saying that it is true that time is not an illusion?

*head explodes*

 

[clickynext]

Originally posted by: nakedfrog

Originally posted by: dullard

Originally posted by: nakedfrog
The sentence below this one is false.
The sentence above this one is true.
"Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so." - Ford Prefect

So you are saying that it is false that time is an illusion? Then you back it up saying that it is true that time is not an illusion?

*head explodes*

*compiler error*

 

[So]

How about "The soil turns to clay toward the south end of the watershed"

 

[Vegitto]

Whilst?

"The soils turn to clays whilst moving to the south part of the watershed"

 

[JujuFish]

"There is clay at the southern end of the watershed."

 

[cKGunslinger]

"Don't plant your vegetables by the watershed, that clay won't grow sh1t!"

 

[ohtwell]

The soil turns to clay towards the southern part of the watershed. ???

I like this better though: "That shiznit be turning to clay when you get on over there!"


: ) Amanda

 

[tjaisv]

Originally posted by: cKGunslinger
"As we cruise to the south side of da 'shed, this here soil turns to mutha-fvcking clay!"

FTW

 

[imported_sling]

Originally posted by: cKGunslinger
"As we cruise to the south side of da 'shed, this here soil turns to mutha-fvcking clay!"

WERD