Originally posted by: BeauJangles
I wouldn't say your deadlift is horrible or even bad by any means. You maintain a strong lumbar arch throughout the movement and you have the basic ideas in place.
The first thing you should notice is on your return -- do you see how your knees are in the way of the bar? That happens because you're trying to lower the bar down with your knees first. When you lower the bar it should be the opposite of when you raise it. On the way up that means knees, hips, upper body. On the way down that means upper body, hips, knees. Shoot your ass back behind you to begin lowering the bar and once it has dropped you can start bending the knees.
The other thing you should work on is your starting position. You have the right idea, but your shoulders need to be in front of the bar. It's hard for me to explain, but look at this picture and compare it to your deadlift:
http://stronglifts.com/wp-cont...dlift-hip-position.jpg You'll find the lift much easier when the weight sits further back.
Also, check out this video:
http://vimeo.com/1073939?pg=embed&sec=1073939