YAGT: need someone to critique my letter

[PeeluckyDuckee]

I would like a 3rd party opinion on what I wrote in a good-bye letter to a special someone.

Please read it in PM form and reply to me there, as there's a lot of private info and I don't really want to air it all out here.

Just need 2 volunteers. Tell me if it sounds boring, repetitive, dragging on way too long, too mushy, or parts where it may be inappropriate and unnecessary.

Thanks.

 

[PeeluckyDuckee]

anybody?

No grammar/spelling nazis logged on tonight? heh.

 

[JS80]

just post it you tool with the private parts censored out

 

[HaxorNubcake]

just post it and we'll critique

 

[ockky]

POST IT! POST IT! POST IT! /bangs on trashcan lid

 

[JS80]

someon PM him and post it when he sends it

 

[bleuless]

Originally posted by: JS80
someon PM him and post it when he sends it

LOL, pwnt.

 

[Chrono]

WTF would you need someone to proofread a goodbye letter? Wow.

 

[PeeluckyDuckee]

Originally posted by: Chrono
WTF would you need someone to proofread a goodbye letter? Wow.

"Tell me if it sounds boring, repetitive, dragging on way too long, too mushy, or parts where it may be inappropriate and unnecessary. "

PM sent.

 

[hypn0tik]

Sure, I'll read it.

 

[snoopdoug1]

Originally posted by: hypn0tik
Sure, I'll read it.

don't forget to post it for the rest of us

 

[Vegitto]

I'll read it, man . I hope you're just leaving and not killing yourself..

 

[JS80]

Originally posted by: PeeluckyDuckee

Originally posted by: Chrono
WTF would you need someone to proofread a goodbye letter? Wow.

"Tell me if it sounds boring, repetitive, dragging on way too long, too mushy, or parts where it may be inappropriate and unnecessary. "

PM sent.

CHRONO: PASTE IT OR BAN

 

[MercenaryForHire]

Let me guess, you're leaving her for WoW?

- M4H

 

[Manuwell]

Where is teh letter ?

 

[krunchykrome]

WTF is a goodbye letter?

 

[torpid]

I hope this is in addition to a goodbye face-to-face meeting...

 

[Kadarin]

Originally posted by: PeeluckyDuckee

Originally posted by: Chrono
WTF would you need someone to proofread a goodbye letter? Wow.

"Tell me if it sounds boring, repetitive, dragging on way too long, too mushy, or parts where it may be inappropriate and unnecessary. "

PM sent.

If you think there's a chance that it might be, then it probably is. However, chicks dig that mushy, boring, repetitive, dragging crap, so she'll love it. Maybe.

 

[pinion9]

I PMd him and here it is:

Dear Stewart,

I have been trying to think of a way to tell you this without hurting you. We have so many wonderful memories together, like the time we both dressed up as Judy Garland and went to "The Manhole." Memories like that will never fade.

It is time to say goodbye, though. I have been unfaithful. Many times, with many different men. Often times it was with many different men simultaneously. There is just an area of me you could never touch, but Roger sure can.

Also, please get yourself tested. I have these warts and cannot be totally sure they were from that bullfrog that Lenny brought over.

 

[nsx98]

^ ahaha!

 

[dullard]

How about a serious answer: Never, ever, end any form of relationship with a letter. Plain and simple. Do it in person if possible. If not, do it on the phone. After it is over, there is no need for a letter. You'll only regret the letter later in life. Tear up what you wrote. Delete it from your computer. Move on with your life.

 

[DeadByDawn]

Originally posted by: pinion9
I PMd him and here it is:

Dear Stewart,

I have been trying to think of a way to tell you this without hurting you. We have so many wonderful memories together, like the time we both dressed up as Judy Garland and went to "The Manhole." Memories like that will never fade.

It is time to say goodbye, though. I have been unfaithful. Many times, with many different men. Often times it was with many different men simultaneously. There is just an area of me you could never touch, but Roger sure can.

Also, please get yourself tested. I have these warts and cannot be totally sure they were from that bullfrog that Lenny brought over.

LMFAO