Which sentence is right?

bandXtrb

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Let me play for you an example.

or...

Let me play an example for you.


The second sounds right, but is the first okay?
 

jonnyGURU

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The first one doesn't sound correct, no matter how I concentrate on it... which is something I shouldn't have to do.

Of course, I UNDERSTAND IT, but I base this ability on years of reading computer manuals and bicycle manuals that had been translated from Taiwanese.

Use the second sentence because quality is our chasing!
 

jonnyGURU

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Speaking of translating.... I sent your two sentences through Babelfish and back to see what it would translate into and I got an even BETTER way to phrase that sentence from it:

"Allow me to play an example for you." ;)


Nice, eh?
 

bandXtrb

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<< Of course, I UNDERSTAND IT, but I base this ability on years of reading computer manuals and bicycle manuals that had been translated from Taiwanese. >>

ROFL! ;)
 

yiwonder

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Ok, I think both are correct ways of saying the same thing. However, there is a "traditional" way of saying it and then there's the other way. I think the second one is the "traditional" way or the way that we would say it if just talking to a friend.

It depends on the audience to decide which one to use. If you're talking to a less mature reader (like jonny for example;)), then you should probably use the second one. Less mature isn't a good word for it....maybe something like less experienced. Do you at least see what I'm trying to say?
 

dman

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IF you ask Yoda, he'd say neither.

For you, an example, let me play.
 

Kung Lau

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<< Let me play for you an example. >>




<< Let me play an example for you. >>





"Yo,check this out."