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Glitchny

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Sep 4, 2002
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Hey, I've had to write some stories for s a few of my classes and some stff on my spare time, was just wondering what u guys thought of it.

Writing can be found here

all criticism welcome
 

bluewall21

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I read "Late", and its its pretty interesting. Although there are a few errors ("Mom" not capitalized, among others), the concept is well thought out and the execution is decent. Nice job.