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What's the proper way to word these sentences?

JEDI

Lifer
i usually write my main point, then explain in parenthesis.

ie: Anyone have reviews on Walmart's Viva tires? (I need new tires soon.)

I'm no english professor, but that looks horrible.

How do i better phase that? Or link on how to write better to explain your point?

THX
 
Originally posted by: Chraticn
I'll need new tires soon. Does anyone have reviews for Walmart's Viva line?

hm..explain first, then make my point?

is that the norm of how to write stuff?
 
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