what do you think of my story.....

[MikeMike]

this was my best writing from this year for school, if you wanna read it go ahead.

most of it is true, names, and what actually happened havent been changed, although i am sure i exagerated some of the details, yes, everything that i say happened happened.

My family story

MIKE

 

[MithShrike]

Didn't read it all. Don't care.

 

[bleeb]

I read the first line and looks retarded. j/k

Good job

 

[Aves]

Originally posted by: Mith
Didn't read it all. Don't care.

Then why post?

Looks good nourdmrolNMT1.

 

[rival]

i read about half and called it quits, single spaced stories are no fun

 

[MikeMike]

i didnt feel like editing it, i could upload a word file of it, but the cut and past job didnt work to welll.

MIKE

 

[Lithium381]

yeah, bit hard on my eyes

 

[MikeMike]

http://www.brownwestern.com/oralhistory.doc

(there you go you pussy eyes!! 😉 )

MIKE

 

[conjur]

Originally posted by: Lithium381
yeah, bit hard on my eyes

ayup...there's these things called CR/LF pairs

Oh my,? I thought to myself

"Oh my"??? WTF talks like that??

 

[notfred]

Yeah, I read it, don't become a writer, cause you're not very good.

 

[DerwenArtos12]

Originally posted by: aves2k

Originally posted by: Mith
Didn't read it all. Don't care.

Then why post?

Looks good nourdmrolNMT1.

1) to nef
2) to let him kow that it s too boring!

 

[MikeMike]

never planned on writing, it's another writing, this one the introduction to my final portfolio.

and it was a prompt that i had to use, did some research, and wrote that in about 1 hour. (the original writing i posted)

MIKE

 

[notfred]

Originally posted by: nourdmrolNMT1
never planned on writing, it's another writing, this one the introduction to my final portfolio.

and it was a prompt that i had to use, did some research, and wrote that in about 1 hour. (the original writing i posted)

MIKE

Yeah, that sucks too. At least the first one had an attempt at a story in it, this is just you rambling about nothing.

 

[MikeMike]

that is supposed to be rambling about nothing, it is supposed to be able to "hear my voice" in it when she reads it, its more about me than anything.

ill post my best report on here too, it actually is quite decent, but gets repetitive, and is about hydrogen cars (i posted it once for someone doing a report on the exact same thing)

MIKE

 

[notfred]

What is the point of you posting this stuff, are you trying to get us to critique it?

 

[Azraele]

It's an interesting peek into a life. I'd like to see it fleshed out even more.

 

[PCMarine]

I prefer reading papers in proper essay form.

 

[Yossarian]

Originally posted by: notfred
Yeah, I read it, don't become a writer, cause you're not very good.

is it really necessary to be a complete jerkoff just because it's the internet?

 

[azztec]

my favorite part...

About thirty seconds later all seven of them arrived. Katherine, Elizabeth, Thomas, Robert, Cadwallader, Evan, Sidney and Mary,

 

[Talon02]

I can't read good.

 

[Cyberian]

Originally posted by: Azraele
It's an interesting peek into a life. I'd like to see it fleshed out even more.

It is indeed.
Thanks for sharing. Kinda sad how two of her children died.

 

[Xionide]

You suck at teh interword processor.

-Xionide

 

[MikeMike]

all i know is they died on the way over, dont ask me exactly what, but its all true, and so are the names 😛.

someone here needs to name their kid cadwallader!!

MIKE

no point, just felt like posting it, get a life notfred 😉