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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Um, I would call it on the lower end of "ok".
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yea, im not a very imaginative person but i know how to use publisher quite well what do you recomend i do to make it more appeling
 
I'd change your large font, might be confusing to old people (target market). Also, since you're aiming this at people who are ignorant of computers, I'd list symptoms you remedy instead of the solutions, which they might not really understand the technical jargon
 
Originally posted by: ofiraltarasy
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Um, I would call it on the lower end of "ok".
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yea, im not a very imaginative person but i know how to use publisher quite well what do you recomend i do to make it more appeling
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Ditch the large Windows logo. Move that list into two columns. Make the e-mail address at the bottom much smaller.
 
Originally posted by: ofiraltarasy
I made a flyer to raise some ends meat Flyer

What do you think
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With all the ancient jews down there in Miami... you should offer Computer Training for the elderly... You'd make a fortune.
 
Originally posted by: diegoalcatraz
I'd change your large font, might be confusing to old people (target market). Also, since you're aiming this at people who are ignorant of computers, I'd list symptoms you remedy instead of the solutions, which they might not really understand the technical jargon
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Explain? Please
 
Originally posted by: ofiraltarasy
Originally posted by: diegoalcatraz
I'd change your large font, might be confusing to old people (target market). Also, since you're aiming this at people who are ignorant of computers, I'd list symptoms you remedy instead of the solutions, which they might not really understand the technical jargon
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Explain? Please
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Perhaps that was ambiguous. The font you use for "Computer Repair", phone number, and email address. I'd stick with something more standard.

As for the latter suggestion, most end users won't understand the difference from "PC Repair", "Operating System Repair", or "Software Failure". It's all the same thing to them. You're telling them you can remove Spyware, but as far as they know it's something "Bad", they probably don't know enough to diagnose it themselves (or differentiate it from the previously mentioned problems)

If you remove that windows logo, as was suggested, you can use the extra space to elaborate on these things. A 2-3 word description of each service isn't always enough to make it meaningful to potential customers.
 
Originally posted by: diegoalcatraz
Originally posted by: ofiraltarasy
Originally posted by: diegoalcatraz
I'd change your large font, might be confusing to old people (target market). Also, since you're aiming this at people who are ignorant of computers, I'd list symptoms you remedy instead of the solutions, which they might not really understand the technical jargon
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Explain? Please
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Perhaps that was ambiguous. The font you use for "Computer Repair", phone number, and email address. I'd stick with something more standard.

As for the latter suggestion, most end users won't understand the difference from "PC Repair", "Operating System Repair", or "Software Failure". It's all the same thing to them. You're telling them you can remove Spyware, but as far as they know it's something "Bad", they probably don't know enough to diagnose it themselves (or differentiate it from the previously mentioned problems)

If you remove that windows logo, as was suggested, you can use the extra space to elaborate on these things. A 2-3 word description of each service isn't always enough to make it meaningful to potential customers.
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New Flyer
ok i made a new one but i dont understand what your saying about the description
 
All the description is too much. You need to make it stand out. Try putting "NERD" in big huge letters.
 
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: ofiraltarasy
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Um, I would call it on the lower end of "ok".
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yea, im not a very imaginative person but i know how to use publisher quite well what do you recomend i do to make it more appeling
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Make the e-mail address at the bottom much smaller.
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Maybe put the E-mail address in a more "plain" Font. It's kinda hard to read as it is.

 
why a santa claus avatar for a jewish boy? hmm!

and miami, area code 954? methinks you live in broward.

I KNOW PEOPLE THERE.

(i even grew up there.)
 
I would suggest printing it with your e-mail address and number on tear off tabs on the bottom. People are lazy and might not bother to write your information down, but if you leave them a pre-made tab with your info on it they might tear it off and take it home.
 
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