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WolverineGator

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"Welcome to Sauk Valley Events" "Welcome to Sauk Valley Events"

Seems redundant. Seems redundant.

Start off with "We are your new source for..." The title already welcomed me.

How about:
"Click the event title for more information on upcoming events in the Sauk Valley."

instead of:

"Here are some of the upcoming events in the Sauk Valley. Click the event title for more information. "

Looks good otherwise. Plays nice with FF too.
 

T3C

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Originally posted by: WolverineGator
"Welcome to Sauk Valley Events" "Welcome to Sauk Valley Events"

Seems redundant. Seems redundant.

Start off with "We are your new source for..." The title already welcomed me.

How about:
"Click the event title for more information on upcoming events in the Sauk Valley."

instead of:

"Here are some of the upcoming events in the Sauk Valley. Click the event title for more information. "

Looks good otherwise. Plays nice with FF too.


Thanks!
Will make some changes.

-TechITguy