Such a powerful poem.

chuckywang

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?I froze your tears and made a dagger,
and stabbed it in my cock forever.
It stays there like Excalibur,
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are.

Take this cool dark steeled blade,
Steal it, sheath it, in your lake.
I?d drown with you to be together.
Must you breathe? Cos I need Heaven.?

 

tweakmm

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May 28, 2001
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Originally posted by: JS80
Poems are overrated.
I disagree.
Poems can be a very elegant and beautiful way of expressing things which otherwise would be very hard or impossible to express. Very similar to painting and music.

That being said, the OP is neither of the above.