Such a powerful poem

[Riddleman]

I didn't like that stabbing my cock forever line, it made me cringe alittle. Thus your poem is powerful in that sense.

 

[Maximus Power]

Originally posted by: MournSanity
My blog (linked in my sig) has a bunch of poetry I have written. I update it frequently with new poetry. I usually write about politics, religion, and human nature, but I sometimes write other, less serious poetry as well.

I usually don't bash other people's heart and soul that has
been translated to word but I read some of your poems,

and I'm afraid they suck pretty bad.

I mean,

Damn.

Sorry.

 

[MournSanity]

Originally posted by: Maximus Power

Originally posted by: MournSanity
My blog (linked in my sig) has a bunch of poetry I have written. I update it frequently with new poetry. I usually write about politics, religion, and human nature, but I sometimes write other, less serious poetry as well.

I usually don't bash other people's heart and soul that has
been translated to word but I read some of your poems,

and I'm afraid they suck pretty bad.

I mean,

Damn.

Sorry.

That's fine. It was only your opinion. An opinion that means absolutely nothing to me.

 

[BullyCanadian]

........

 

[Maximus Power]

Originally posted by: MournSanity

Originally posted by: Maximus Power

Originally posted by: MournSanity
My blog (linked in my sig) has a bunch of poetry I have written. I update it frequently with new poetry. I usually write about politics, religion, and human nature, but I sometimes write other, less serious poetry as well.

I usually don't bash other people's heart and soul that has
been translated to word but I read some of your poems,

and I'm afraid they suck pretty bad.

I mean,

Damn.

Sorry.

That's fine. It was only your opinion. An opinion that means absolutely nothing to me.

Yes it was just my opinion.

Just as another's opinion would be that they really like your poetry.
Which is obvious, as it is appreciated by a few members in this thread..

Max

 

[ConwayJim]

T H E
O F F I C E
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[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: MournSanity

Originally posted by: Maximus Power

Originally posted by: MournSanity
My blog (linked in my sig) has a bunch of poetry I have written. I update it frequently with new poetry. I usually write about politics, religion, and human nature, but I sometimes write other, less serious poetry as well.

I usually don't bash other people's heart and soul that has
been translated to word but I read some of your poems,

and I'm afraid they suck pretty bad.

I mean,

Damn.

Sorry.

That's fine. It was only your opinion. An opinion that means absolutely nothing to me.

I think he means "include some iambic pentameter" in your future works, as it will improve its overall quality"

 

[SomeDude22]

does this involve pr0n and your father

 

[DingDingDao]

Originally posted by: Wallydraigle
That is a great poem...








for me to poop on.

Fixed.

 

[chuckywang]

bump for the powerful poem

 

[GasX]

why are you bumping this?

 

[chuckywang]

Originally posted by: Mwilding
why are you bumping this?

cause it's a powerful poem, IMO

 

[NuclearNed]

It's easy to grin
When your ship comes in
And you've got the stock market beat.
But the man worthwhile,
Is the man who can smile,
When his shorts are too tight in the seat.

 

[chuckywang]

bump for the powerful poem.

 

[xXped0thugXx]

poem sucks, any poem that is "elegant" enough to put the word "cock" in it, is not a good poem at all

 

[chuckywang]

Originally posted by: xXped0thugXx
poem sucks, any poem that is "elegant" enough to put the word "cock" in it, is not a good poem at all

a poem with 50+ words, and you focus on just one word? That's not good criticism. Try to understand the poem as a whole.

 

[Dacalo]

Originally posted by: chuckywang
bump for the powerful poem.

Stop bumping this lamer.

 

[whistleclient]

dumbest poem ever.

 

Seems like some half baked wanna be poetic crap spawing from typical suburban angst brought about by american excess.

 

[chuckywang]

Originally posted by: chuckywang

Originally posted by: xXped0thugXx
poem sucks, any poem that is "elegant" enough to put the word "cock" in it, is not a good poem at all

a poem with 50+ words, and you focus on just one word? That's not good criticism. Try to understand the poem as a whole.

HAHAHAHA. You ran and hid from my sharp criticism. pwned.

 

[mobobuff]

STAB THIS THREAD IN YOUR COCK FOREVER AND STOP BUMPING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[NiKeFiDO]

Originally posted by: Wallydraigle
That is a great poem...








in my pants.

 

[monk3y]

Originally posted by: Wallydraigle
That is a great poem...








in my pants.

I don't know why but I had to start laughing when I read that.

 

[monk3y]

Originally posted by: mobobuff
STAB THIS THREAD IN YOUR COCK FOREVER AND STOP BUMPING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUch h8 m8...

 

[chuckywang]

Originally posted by: InstincT

Originally posted by: mobobuff
STAB THIS THREAD IN YOUR COCK FOREVER AND STOP BUMPING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUch h8 m8...

yeah, don't hate the playa, hate the game.