Seriously? and you are in college?

MikeMike

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Our goals is to increase our sales and become the number one COMPANY.
The current item that COMPANY are using that he is using is mainly facebook. With COMPANY using facebook it’s not effective at all. They are minimum promotion for his product which that has hurt his sales. There is not a proper SEO content generation is low and the website as a poor design. These items are not right because there is so many changes that he has to update this website to gain more customers and make it easier for them to buy and to look around on the website
really? come on people... i have to take what this says, and put it into an overall paper... the problem... i now have to translate it too... grr people grr.
 
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coxmaster

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Currently the company is primarily using Facebook. The company is currently using Facebook ineffectively as well. The lack of promotion for the product has hurt sales dramatically. There is also no search engine optimization (SEO), a lack of content, and the company website is poorly designed. In order to gain customers the website needs to be updated and fixed; which will make it easier for customers to find and buy items.


Grammar might not be perfect.. but its translated
 

Ika

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Are you a TA? Is this person foreign? Kinda just sounds like a language barrier ot me.
 

JS80

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really? come on people... i have to take what this says, and put it into an overall paper... the problem... i now have to translate it too... grr people grr.

Seriously? And you teach college?
I've had professors with waaaaay worse engrish than this.
 

MikeMike

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Seriously? And you teach college?
I've had professors with waaaaay worse engrish than this.

no, i don't teach it... she is a partner of mine in a group...

100% american, well, i mean, she isn't foreign.
 
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theflyingpig

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How the fuck did she get into college?

She paid. That's the new American standard for college eligibility. If you have money, it doesn't matter how stupid you are, you'll get accepted somewhere, and you'll get your 'education'. Everyone knows this.
 

grrl

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Wow. I teach foreign students and that could have been copied from some of them! English is really her first language?
 

vbuggy

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Wow. I teach foreign students and that could have been copied from some of them! English is really her first language?

Dumb native students sound foreign when they pick up their pens.
 

thepd7

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Currently the company is primarily using Facebook. The company is currently using Facebook ineffectively as well. The lack of promotion for the product has hurt sales dramatically. There is also no search engine optimization (SEO), a lack of content, and the company website is poorly designed. In order to gain customers the website needs to be updated and fixed; which will make it easier for customers to find and buy items.


Grammar might not be perfect.. but its translated

this. wasn't too hard, you're just whining.

And you wonder why people require a 3.0 GPA for jobs. Anyone can get a 2.6-2.8 at a state school.
 

Ronstang

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She should be shot because she is a fucking retard. How the fuck did she get into college?

Maybe quotas? I had a girl way worse than this in a group in graduate school. Nice girl, dumb as a rock...but she was Black and that was the only thing needed to get into school. It is comforting knowing she is out there somewhere costing a company money/productivity.
 

ConstipatedVigilante

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I had to do a two-person project about Wal-Mart at the end of high school. My teammate and I had to write up a project proposal. I let him do it because he was insistent, and EVERY. SINGLE. SENTENCE. started with "WalMart." It was pitiful.
 

JS80

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Seriously? And you teach college?
I've had professors with waaaaay worse engrish than this.

Sorry, I didn't mean you. I meant, I've experienced professors who can't speak a lick of English, and I upgraded your topic title.