Rip my Resume (or offer helpful advice!)

[simms]

Thanks. Are there any other improvements I should consider?

 

[KillerCharlie]

I personally would move the "skill sets" section and put it after "additional experience" or somewhere around there. Recruiters like to look at experience first.

 

[simms]

Ok, I've edited it and I'll upload it shortly. Is it just me or does anyone else find the fact that

"Jun 2005
- present"

looks a bit unprofessional? It doesn't carry over nicely and I don't know how to make it flow better.

 

[simms]

I guess with no one replying it looks good? Nothing else to really fix up?

If this is the case, at least respond telling me so 🙂

 

[imported_waldo]

It looks pretty good. The only thing I would change is make your descriptions shorter and more concise. Like in the first one, no one cares for what faculty it was. A little more white space i those areas would look good.

 

[simms]

Originally posted by: waldo
It looks pretty good. The only thing I would change is make your descriptions shorter and more concise. Like in the first one, no one cares for what faculty it was. A little more white space i those areas would look good.

Hmm. I'm not sure I get what you mean. Like what faculty? The chemical engineering part, or the degree (bachelor of applied science?)