Resume & cover letter creation/review services?

SarcasticDwarf

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I am graduating and applying for jobs now. I think my resume is pretty good but my cover letters suck. Can anyone recommend any services? There are a very large number of them but little to differentiate them.

Looking to spend no more than $200 (I wish I could pay more and I know it is worth more but I just don't have the cash).
 

SarcasticDwarf

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Originally posted by: drinkmorejava
Your college doesn't have a CRC?

Yes, but I am not all that impressed and there are things they don't do (see below). They are simply not there to do this kind of thing and don't have the professional experience to do this well.

Basically what I want to do is provide a copy of my current resume and copies of the job descriptions of the two jobs that I liked the most and in return get a cover letter and an optimized resume. My resume looks good but not great.
 

halik

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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: drinkmorejava
Your college doesn't have a CRC?

Yes, but I am not all that impressed and there are things they don't do (see below). They are simply not there to do this kind of thing and don't have the professional experience to do this well.

Basically what I want to do is provide a copy of my current resume and copies of the job descriptions of the two jobs that I liked the most and in return get a cover letter and an optimized resume. My resume looks good but not great.

LMFAO

And the psychic service will write up all your past experience and skills.
 

SarcasticDwarf

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Originally posted by: halik
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: drinkmorejava
Your college doesn't have a CRC?

Yes, but I am not all that impressed and there are things they don't do (see below). They are simply not there to do this kind of thing and don't have the professional experience to do this well.

Basically what I want to do is provide a copy of my current resume and copies of the job descriptions of the two jobs that I liked the most and in return get a cover letter and an optimized resume. My resume looks good but not great.

LMFAO

And the psychic service will write up all your past experience and skills.

I already have a complete resume. I guess you have never worked with this kind of service before.
 

SarcasticDwarf

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Originally posted by: tfinch2
Post it up here.

Screw paying $200 bucks

1) easily googleable
2) I don't think that most AT members would have the expertise to assist with optimizing a resume for HR (both because few are heavily involved in hiring and the jobs I am going for are NOT anything that AT is really familiar with).
 

Injury

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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: tfinch2
Post it up here.

Screw paying $200 bucks

1) easily googleable
2) I don't think that most AT members would have the expertise to assist with optimizing a resume for HR (both because few are heavily involved in hiring and the jobs I am going for are NOT anything that AT is really familiar with).

You'd be surprised what AT is familiar with. Not everyone here works in IT.

 

TruePaige

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Originally posted by: Injury
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: tfinch2
Post it up here.

Screw paying $200 bucks

1) easily googleable
2) I don't think that most AT members would have the expertise to assist with optimizing a resume for HR (both because few are heavily involved in hiring and the jobs I am going for are NOT anything that AT is really familiar with).

You'd be surprised what AT is familiar with. Not everyone here works in IT.

Hell since everyone here makes $150k I'd be surprised if anyone worked in IT. =p

I know from my experience IT pay doesn't top the books..
 

xSauronx

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Originally posted by: necine
wow $200 to write a resume... i'll do it for you, lol.

fuck him, ill do it for $125
(non-cc paypal only!!!!11111one)

post it here, iirc, there are actually a few HR people anyway who could probably be helpful
 

Turkish

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How about we review each others resumes? Or I'd appreciate if anyone would review mine for me :)

Here's mine with name/addresses/phone/etc. taken out:

mine
 

Gibson486

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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: tfinch2
Post it up here.

Screw paying $200 bucks

1) easily googleable
2) I don't think that most AT members would have the expertise to assist with optimizing a resume for HR (both because few are heavily involved in hiring and the jobs I am going for are NOT anything that AT is really familiar with).

LOL....what makes you think that the people who will review your resume are really involved in HR? If you go to that service the person who will be reviewing your stuff will be some person who is paid less than 40K a year.

They will do the same exact job your CRC will do.
 

sjwaste

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A fool and his money are soon parted.

Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.

Also, seriously, what field is it?
 

SarcasticDwarf

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Originally posted by: sjwaste
Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.


What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.


Originally posted by: sjwaste
Also, seriously, what field is it?

Library science which involves (to varying degrees); Taxonomies, folksonomies, search engine optimization, reference, research, project management, software development, we development, collection development, etc, etc.
 

E equals MC2

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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: sjwaste
Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.


What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.

I can hook you up with my GF. Seriously. Let me tell you her credentials:

*Just finished her Harvard Masters program in Education Policy

*5+ Years of SAT tutoring / Essay experience. She charges $60 an hour and always finds work through networking & Craigslist.

*Her articulate writing experience has helped her to expand into the areas of resume and cover letter writing. I hear from her convo with her clients on her cell that she's doing a great job and produces GREAT results.

*With her own cover letter and resume, she just got hired as the Director of Enrollment for xxxx Public Schools. She starts in June.

PM me if you're interested, I'll give you her number and you can at least have a chat with her (As many do so and feel free to walk away).
 

pcslookout

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I find it funny how you all are so willing to help when the real reason is far from help you want to give. People everywhere easily make a good amount online just writing resumes for people just like programmers do with side jobs. Not enough but nice extra on the side from your real job. It can help with vacation money. Not I do not do this I know someone that does. He does really well.
 

pcslookout

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Originally posted by: E equals MC2
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: sjwaste
Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.


What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.

I can hook you up with my GF. Seriously. Let me tell you her credentials:

*Just finished her Harvard Masters program in Education Policy

*5+ Years of SAT tutoring / Essay experience. She charges $60 an hour and always finds work through networking & Craigslist.

*Her articulate writing experience has helped her to expand into the areas of resume and cover letter writing. I hear from her convo with her clients on her cell that she's doing a great job and produces GREAT results.

*With her own cover letter and resume, she just got hired as the Director of Enrollment for xxxx Public Schools. She starts in June.

PM me if you're interested, I'll give you her number and you can at least have a chat with her (As many do so and feel free to walk away).

Proof that people make a good amount of extra money on the side from their real job writing stuff for people. It is very easy to find work if you can do this kind of writing.
 

E equals MC2

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Originally posted by: pcslookout
Originally posted by: E equals MC2
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: sjwaste
Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.


What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.

I can hook you up with my GF. Seriously. Let me tell you her credentials:

*Just finished her Harvard Masters program in Education Policy

*5+ Years of SAT tutoring / Essay experience. She charges $60 an hour and always finds work through networking & Craigslist.

*Her articulate writing experience has helped her to expand into the areas of resume and cover letter writing. I hear from her convo with her clients on her cell that she's doing a great job and produces GREAT results.

*With her own cover letter and resume, she just got hired as the Director of Enrollment for xxxx Public Schools. She starts in June.

PM me if you're interested, I'll give you her number and you can at least have a chat with her (As many do so and feel free to walk away).

Proof that people make a good amount of extra money on the side from their real job writing stuff for people. It is very easy to find work if you can do this kind of writing.

It's all about how you sell yourself. The moment she drobs the H-bomb (Harvard), ppl call her up like crazy.

Also $$$ does not always equate to quality. She's had many clients where their previous tutor charge something ridiculous like $100-150 an hour and their work fvcking blows. GF charges $50-60 and these very clients praise her for being MUCH better and producing SOLID results.
 

pcslookout

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Originally posted by: E equals MC2
Originally posted by: pcslookout
Originally posted by: E equals MC2
Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
Originally posted by: sjwaste
Those services can't do a better job than you can, if you actually sit down to do it. You're still in college, you have nothing but free time. Learn how to write your own resumes and cover letters. It's not all that difficult.


What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.

I can hook you up with my GF. Seriously. Let me tell you her credentials:

*Just finished her Harvard Masters program in Education Policy

*5+ Years of SAT tutoring / Essay experience. She charges $60 an hour and always finds work through networking & Craigslist.

*Her articulate writing experience has helped her to expand into the areas of resume and cover letter writing. I hear from her convo with her clients on her cell that she's doing a great job and produces GREAT results.

*With her own cover letter and resume, she just got hired as the Director of Enrollment for xxxx Public Schools. She starts in June.

PM me if you're interested, I'll give you her number and you can at least have a chat with her (As many do so and feel free to walk away).

Proof that people make a good amount of extra money on the side from their real job writing stuff for people. It is very easy to find work if you can do this kind of writing.

It's all about how you sell yourself. The moment she drobs the H-bomb (Harvard), ppl call her up like crazy.

Also $$$ does not always equate to quality. She's had many clients where their previous tutor charge something ridiculous like $100-150 an hour and their work fvcking blows. GF charges $50-60 and these very clients praise her for being MUCH better and producing SOLID results.

Of course you have some people who are really dedicated to their work and others who are not. The price they charge has nothing to do with the quality of the work ever.
 

sjwaste

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Originally posted by: SarcasticDwarf
What experience is this statement based on? As I have mentioned NUMEROUS TIMES, I ALREADY have a good resume and cover letter. I am looking to have mine tailored and tweaked more.

It's based on my experience in job-seeking. I've tweaked my own docs and have a pretty good idea of what works. I get calls back when I apply at a pretty high percentage, and there's no disconnect in what they're looking for vs the skills I'm offering. No paid service required, I just looked at other resumes in my field and free resources via Google on how to write a good resume for that field. I'm in management consulting, so I'm not sure that my experience here will help you. I've helped others write and tweak, so I'll share what I have below.

Library science which involves (to varying degrees); Taxonomies, folksonomies, search engine optimization, reference, research, project management, software development, we development, collection development, etc, etc.

I asked because if it was my field, I'd offer to help you free of charge, because that's the kind of board this is (sometimes, heh). Unfortunately, I have zero clue when it comes to LS. I'll offer this, and maybe it'll save you $200, if not, maybe this will help weed out the services you're looking at.

First find out if the field is conservative or not, because that's going to dictate the overall format of your resume -- conservative fields require a very specific format. I'm seeing that first hand now as I'm finishing a law degree and the resume requirements are very different from consulting.

If you're free to dictate your own format, here is what I use:

- Name/contact info at the top
- Personal Summary (list key accomplishments, broad skills, and personal strengths)
- Selected Accomplishments (use a heading for each project you've completed, then some sub-bullets to outline the specific milestones and tools you used to do it, this is where you want to use proper keywords from your field in case they're searching text)
- Work Experience (1-2 lines each, employer, dates, key responsibilities. most of what you did for them is covered in the section above, so keep it brief)
- Education (reverse chrono, also list certifications)

This should all fit on one page with decent whitespace unless you're a career changer, have lots of publications (add a section for that), or just have a ton of experience that you can't cut out. Two page resumes aren't the worst thing in the world, they do get read, especially if you're going into a niche field.

My legal resume is a lot different: Header, education (incl activities and co-curriculars), legal experience, other work exp/skills. It actually makes it easier to write since they want it to look like that, but it makes it harder to stand out.

Cover letters are a similar story no matter what. First, make sure its properly formatted as a formal letter. Neatness counts in any field, and your professionalism comes through in your writing.

Formal Greeting:

First paragraph, summarize who you are, where you're coming from, the position you want, and any namedropping (so and so referred me, etc). Finish it with a sentence stating that you can do something for them, as opposed to why you would like to work there. It's always about what you can do for them.

Second paragraph, highlight your skills, and weave in the job requirements they're looking to fill. Make sure you tie together your skills with what they want accomplished. This is the meat of it, so make sure you address what you know vs what they're looking for, and also talk about what you can do in terms of learning and keeping up with the field. Address any deficiencies in your candidacy here too.

Third paragraph, close it. If I can provide any more info/writing samples/whatever, please contact me. I look forward to... whatever.

Signature.

Hope this helps a little bit.
 

sjwaste

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Repost as a PDF? I dont have Word 2007 installed and I dont want to dl the compatibility pack.
 

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Many Headhunters/Recruiters will assist you in tuning a cover letter if you develop a relationship with them.