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Poetry Thread

LED

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Didn;t think so but I'll try to start one and see if anyone can floow or write something in connection ;)

Techniques of Japanese Poetry

Haiku

To start off, you need to know what the basic layout for a Haiku is. A Haiku has at least 17 syllables with 3 lines. The order of the syllables is 5,7,5. When getting ready to write your Haiku, you should brainstorm some ideas. Be sure to choose something simple and not too complicated. When choosing a theme for your Haiku, make sure to choose something people already know about and then provide them a way to look at familiar situations and experiences in a different way. It may be helpful to look around at your surroundings to choose a topic. Specifically, when writing my Haiku, "Fallen," I got my idea from just looking out my window and seeing the leaves on the ground.

Tanka

The basic technique of writing a Tanka poem is that it has 31 syllables with 5 lines. The order of the syllables are 5,7,5,7,7. This is how people in America write Tanka poetry; however, in Japan it would be written in one straight line. When reading aloud this type of poetry, you need two people. One person reads the first verse and the other reads the next. A well written Tanka usually consists of one theme that describes a general idea throughout the whole poem. When writing my Tanka poem called "Morning," I thought about what I do daily to come up with my idea. Thinking about your daily life and your experiences might help you come up with a theme of your own.

Renga

Another type of Japanese poetry is Renga. The Renga has the same format as the Japanese Tanka. Renga poems can have as many verses as you want. Each verse has 31 syllables with 5 lines. The syllables per line are 5,7,5,7,7. It's practically the same as the Tanka, except for the fact that the Renga is like a competition. There are two poets, one takes the first two lines, and the other takes the last three lines. The way the challenge starts is the first poet composes the first two lines in a way that makes it difficult for the other poet. They have to be clever in order to add on to the first two lines. When Samantha and I composed "The Crush", she was responsible for writing the first two lines of the verse and I wrote the last three lines. This format continued until we had completed our Renga. It was challenging to think of the next three lines to add to the previous two lines Samantha had written. First, I thought of a line that would flow with what Samantha had written. Then I had to make sure I had the accurate amount of syllables that followed the 5,7,5,7,7 pattern.

 

LED

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rahul...yahoo he gives nothing or no thing
to this thread he needs one lesson
given time he may give something
to us or someone else
more then neffing :p
 

LED

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Originally posted by: Mwilding
I like big butts and I cannot lie...


Not all butts are what they call fatty
Some are firm to touch some are nasty
but the worse in society today
have filters and smoke
so they say ;)
 

rahul

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I have come, alas, to the great forum of Anand,
to the pimply teens and to the night crew,
when the sense is all lost from the posts,
though my wit will not lose its edge,
so bored am I with this nef-fest ,
that speaks and feels as though it were rhyme.

And likewise this rahul written rhyme
stays aloft, like a mod in a nef-fest,
and is unmoved, nor set on edge,
by the inanity that hide as posts
and like the neffing @ work crew,
Whiles his time on this forum of Anand.
 

LED

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rose.gif
to rahul and his turn
but watch out for the thorn ;)
 

rahul

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LED; emitter of light,
or a neffer in flight.
He signs off spiritually,
but his life is virtually
to a keyboard bound.
Such is a lifer's plight,
neffing with all his might.
 

ruffilb

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Originally posted by: LED
rahul...yahoo he gives nothing or no thing
to this thread he needs one lesson
given time he may give something
to us or someone else
more then neffing :p


Quoting FTW
ATOT is all about nef
I suck at haiku!
 

LED

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This soildier fought for a Country
In which he wasn't Born
has seen more then education
can try and learn
rahul and others who's heads have been turned
 

rahul

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Make love not war,
for according to one,
The only sight more melancholy
than a battle lost,
Is a battle won
 

LED

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Easy to state
Until your loved ones are naught
taken away from you
then I'd like to see
what you would do
 

rahul

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I have few to love
and none more than myself.
To incite to war
would test
the devil himself.
 

LED

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There's a thing called Ying Yang
and opposites do attract
it's easy to stay in the middle
indecision indecisive is between white and black
Maturity sticks for ones belief and ready to protect by attack
 

Stretchman

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Originally posted by: LED
Didn;t think so but I'll try to start one and see if anyone can floow or write something in connection ;)

Techniques of Japanese Poetry

Haiku

To start off, you need to know what the basic layout for a Haiku is. A Haiku has at least 17 syllables with 3 lines. The order of the syllables is 5,7,5. When getting ready to write your Haiku, you should brainstorm some ideas. Be sure to choose something simple and not too complicated. When choosing a theme for your Haiku, make sure to choose something people already know about and then provide them a way to look at familiar situations and experiences in a different way. It may be helpful to look around at your surroundings to choose a topic. Specifically, when writing my Haiku, "Fallen," I got my idea from just looking out my window and seeing the leaves on the ground.

Tanka

The basic technique of writing a Tanka poem is that it has 31 syllables with 5 lines. The order of the syllables are 5,7,5,7,7. This is how people in America write Tanka poetry; however, in Japan it would be written in one straight line. When reading aloud this type of poetry, you need two people. One person reads the first verse and the other reads the next. A well written Tanka usually consists of one theme that describes a general idea throughout the whole poem. When writing my Tanka poem called "Morning," I thought about what I do daily to come up with my idea. Thinking about your daily life and your experiences might help you come up with a theme of your own.

Renga

Another type of Japanese poetry is Renga. The Renga has the same format as the Japanese Tanka. Renga poems can have as many verses as you want. Each verse has 31 syllables with 5 lines. The syllables per line are 5,7,5,7,7. It's practically the same as the Tanka, except for the fact that the Renga is like a competition. There are two poets, one takes the first two lines, and the other takes the last three lines. The way the challenge starts is the first poet composes the first two lines in a way that makes it difficult for the other poet. They have to be clever in order to add on to the first two lines. When Samantha and I composed "The Crush", she was responsible for writing the first two lines of the verse and I wrote the last three lines. This format continued until we had completed our Renga. It was challenging to think of the next three lines to add to the previous two lines Samantha had written. First, I thought of a line that would flow with what Samantha had written. Then I had to make sure I had the accurate amount of syllables that followed the 5,7,5,7,7 pattern.

Thank you for the info. I genuinely appreciate it.
 

rahul

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Cry Havoc!
and let slip the dogs of war.
So Caesar was told.
When friends stab in the back,
who needs enemies?
 

LED

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People who stab in the back would not be a friend
and Rome exixted longer then US
so in the end by that description
friends and enemies are the same
which the heart can only blame
 

LED

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sixone you are fun and fine
I enjoy your bytes
but come to think of it
depending on the partner
I prefer sixtynine
 

rahul

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Heart is but
flesh and blood.
then as now,
reason is king
though kings pay little
heed to reason.
 

sixone

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Originally posted by: LED
sixone you are fun and fine
I enjoy your bytes
but come to think of it
depending on the partner
I prefer sixtynine

WTF :Q

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