Please rate my ad

[FatJackSprat]

I am tinkering around with the idea of a Google video ad.

Can anyone give me some comments on this if you have the time.

Test Ad

Thanks!

 

[DeadByDawn]

The blue box at the end with your logo looks sorta fuzzy to me.

 

[MrWizzard]

mmmmm, is it really necessary to say what pawill stands for I fell it makes the solution feel a bit cluttered and I think you are trying to do the exact opposite from your commercial format.

Other than that it's good.

EDIT: I mean that whole exclusive Pennsylvania legal docs part

 

[yobarman]

I'm not familiar with how google video ads work, but i'm guessing you can't have sound.

I think once the ad "speeds up" with more questions, you should do something to make more aggressive. Something like increasing the boldness of the font with each new question, or stacking them on top of each other. That's jut my opinion. I think its good.

 

[FatJackSprat]

Thanks for the great comments, I'm in between appts at work right now, but I will definitely respond more later.

btw - I'm also unhappy with the blue part, but need to think of something.

Thanks!

 

[ViviTheMage]

pretty generic ad....


the blue portion does look a tig fuzzy