Please proofread this cover letter !

[littlegohan]

Dear Mr. Audia;

This letter is in response to your advertisement for the Customer Service Rep position at your branch. I believe that this position matches my career interests and is compatible with my skills and experience.

I had my school arranged work experience in this field. I am familiar to the Customer Service Rep duties. Since the duties of this position are directly connected to the customers, I have strong interpersonal, organizational and planning skills, which I believe would be assets for this position. I have taken economics 12 in the high school, which means that I have knowledge on economy and business such as stocks, RRSP and RESP. I like to meet new people, to work with people, and to learn new knowledge. In addition, I am a responsible, honest, polite, friendly, neat and hard working person. I believe that I would be a qualified applicant.

The enclosed resume is a brief summary of my qualifications. I look forward to hearing in the near future to schedule an interview at your convenience, during which I hope to learn more about your branch¡¦s plans and goals and how I might contribute to the success of its service team. Please contact me. My number is (123)45607849. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,

 

[MacBaine]

I have taken economics 12 in the high school

Sounds like you are foreign

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future to schedule an interview at your convenience

Other than that, looks pretty good

 

[littlegohan]

Actually

the letter is written and for a friend of mine. (You are right, she is foregin)

 

[Farmall]

Originally posted by: littlegohan
Dear Mr. Audia;

I am writing in response to the advertisement of the Customer Service Rep position at your branch. I believe that this position matches my career interests and is compatible with my skills and experience.

My experience and schooling have given me the skills that the Customer Service Rep position requires. I have strong interpersonal, organizational and planning skills which I believe would be an asset to your branch. In high school I have taken the class economics 12 which has given me knowledge on the economy and business such as stocks, RRSP and RESP. I like to work with and meet new people and continue to learn new knowledge. I am honest, responsible, and hard working. I believe that my schooling, experience and work ethic will provide you with a qaulity employee.

I look forward to speaking with you concerning this position and to schedule an interview. Thank you for your consideration. My phone number is (123)45607849.


Yours Sincerely,

Made a few changes - still a rough draft.