Please proof read, correct text on my web site...

[adlep]

Could you read
this and let me know what you think?
I am starting up a new service and want to make sure that I am getting the message out in a professional manner...
Is it clear?
Does it actually make sense?
English isn't my first language so I just want to make sure...
Thanks

 

[KarenMarie]

Hello,

what is your first language?

And my daughter is going thru your site... she will tell you if anything is wrong.

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: KarenMarie
Hello,

what is your first language?

And my daughter is going thru your site... she will tell you if anything is wrong.

I am Polish
Edit: Thanks

 

[veggiefrog]

"After our company was able to recover critical data out of many damaged hard drives within last four months" should be 'within the last four...'

"software related problems such us:" us should be as

also " (such us infamous ?click of death?)" us? do u mean as? (if it is as, then it should be 'such as the infamous...')

"With Computer Fix the risk of loosing any data will be minimal" it's spelled losing

that's all i found hope i helped

 

[KarenMarie]

my b/f is polish. his parents came from there. I like hwen he speaks polish but he doesnt do it to often. just when he talks to his parents. oh yea, we gave our gave out cats polich nicknames, but i cannot post them here...

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: KarenMarie
my b/f is polish. his parents came from there. I like hwen he speaks polish but he doesnt do it to often. just when he talks to his parents. oh yea, we gave our gave out cats polich nicknames, but i cannot post them here...

You see, we are everywhere...
Edit: Thx veggiefrog :beer:
Corrected to accomodate for suggestions..

 

[KarenMarie]

hey, you guys are clean, hard working and respect your women. I can dig that!!

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: KarenMarie
hey, you guys are clean, hard working and respect your women. I can dig that!!

Clean and hard working....
This is a BIG challenge sometimes, especially the clean part...

 

[KarenMarie]

hahaha!!!

veggiefrog is my daughter, btw!

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: KarenMarie
hahaha!!!

veggiefrog is my daughter, btw!

Then another :beer: for the first geek mother/daughter team over at ATOT...
I think..