nevermind...

syzygy

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Objective:
tech professional with [however many] years of experience seeks track position in information systems administration that will utilize
my expertise in [insert specific fields of accomplishment].

list two or three or more specific areas of accomplishment

-a major problem with the entire resume is . . . . grammar. surprise !

- eliminate 'qualifications'. all of it. resume explains your qualifications. 'i am a personable individual . . . ' :)
betrays you as a geek, which for all i know may be a positive.

under education, given your lenghty work experience, why are you still listing your college course work ?

if you need to fill in any gaps, use the cover letter. the cover letter should not regurgitate information already obvious
on the resume.