Need help with email response to possible employer!

[Blieb]

Mr. XXXXX,

Thank you for the prompt response! I am available Someday afternoon at 3:00pm. If this time is not good for you, please let me know.

I look forward to meeting with you.

Sincerely,
Me
me@me.com

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my buddy said to put "Thank you for the opportunity to meet with you!" instead of "Thank you for the prompt response!"

Agreed? The only reason I put the prompt thing was 'cause I put in my rez on thursday, and heard back today!

 

[Blieb]

bump?

 

[minendo]

I would agree with your buddy about making the change to "Thank you for the opportunity to meet with you!" I think it sounds more professional and thankful.

On another note, good luck with getting the job.

 

[gopunk]

i agree with your buddy. thank you fro the prompt response sounds like you're evaluating them or something, which is kind of insulting. also, maybe change "sincerely" to "thanks!"