My Goal Is To Type Longest Story

FamousNYLover

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One time I typed 394-page story based on "Action, Crazy, Crime, Date, Dangerous, Evil, Fantastic, Funny, Romantic", but because I had many errors, I had to throw my entire story away.

Next, I might go for more than 394-page.
I should you example of it.
 
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Fiction story
Before the stories

Action, Crazy, Crime, Date, Dangerous, Evil, Fantastic, Funny, Romantic

Summary: All takes place in 2008.
Item and description.
1. Crime Virus- Crime Virus only affects female. Once crime virus enters the female, that female becomes criminal. Crime virus remains in effect daily, non-stop. Even there's crime virus, she'll still act normal. Sometimes, she use friendliest method to do dangerous stuff. When she touches her friends, crime virus spreads quickly including family members. To defeat crime virus is mint ice cream.

2. Demon Spirit- Once demon enters innocent body, that person turns into demon when something horrible happens.
3. Red Stuff (Actual blood & Magic)- Once person opens it, s/he becomes vampire slayer, and bit each other, both become full fledged vampires. Or marry person who becomes vampires. With magic, they could turn into anything.If Vampire says Magic World, they transform to normal human, but still vampire.
4. Abandoned Time Travel House Mobile- Once someone enter this place, they become crazy, evil, love or depends and bring him or her back that way.
5. Love House- Once, girl set on Love area, lovely memory comes up, and make her love with own real love.
6. Crazy Weather- Once, crazy weather strikes someone, someone becomes crazy.
7. Magic Story TV Video Game- It only shows creative fairy tale videotape. When people play press, they transport inside TV and YOU ARE HERO, PRINCESS, PRINCE OR STAR, KNIGHT, DAME, QUEENS OR KING. Bad Guys and Landscape are made from Computer Graphi. It comes with special equipment for them to use.
8. Magic Transformation Machine- Turns human into anything.

Tuesday, January 1st, 2007. 12:00:00am.
Everyone in house, office and Times Square celebrated the New Years anniversary "7" change to "8" as ball drop to declare "Happy New Year.
 

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Here is example.
1. Crime Virus
Wednesday, January 3rd. 4:00:00am.
In 151 East 97th St, there live five-year-old girl named Sakura Yakura. She was tall for her age, and she was beautiful girl. She had shiny long, gold-blond hair that touches her shoulders, and she had beatiful blue eyes. She lives with her twenty-two moter, Akira Yakura, and thirty-one year-old father, Hiro Yakura. While Sakura was eating delicious Japanese breakfast, something happened. Crime Virus entered Sakura's mouth through rice. At soon as she finish eating it, she become criminal. She knows she become criminal, but don't want her parent to know yet, so she put on friendly act.
Sakura: (lies) Mom, Dad, I feel sick. Can you feel my head?
Mrs. Yakura: Sure.
Mrs. Yakura touches her forehead while Mr. Yakura holds her hands. As they did that, Crime Viruses spread into them and they turn into criminals immediately.
Yakura family: We're Yakura Family going to do crime!
Sakura goes to P.S. 98 Shorack Appoch on 212th St. Her parents signed up for Easy Express Bus MetroCard. Her own MetroCard just arrive. They all had guns, ski masks.
8:07:00am.
She got on BxM1 bus.
8:23:00am.
She got off Broadway & 207th St, and she walk to her schhool. She already made friends there.
8:30:00am.
In school, she acts as normal student, so nobody will suspect she is criminal.
3:45:00pm.
School finish.
4:05:00pm.
At hidden place, Sakura put on her ski mask over on her face, enters 207th St Branch of McDonald's.
Employees and passengers were shocked when Sakura smiles and pulls out her gun.
Sakura: Excuse me, can I get your Happy Meals to go, well as all your valuables. If you do not cooperate, I will shoot you.
Everyone oby. The deposit cashes, credit cards, jewerlries, expensive watches, cell phones, I-pods, MP3 Players, laptop, and empoloyees put Happy Meal inside with their money.
Sakura: Thank you very much.
Sakura exit and fled and hid in the park, then took off her mask. Next, she put on school gym uniform and she went to Broadway & 207th St stop stop.
Meanwhile, employee at McDonald call police.
Police Officers from 34th Precint passd suspect although they didn't notice her because she change outfit.
4:37:00pm.
She got on BxM1.
4:40pm.
Officers were at crime scene at McDonald's.
Officer#1: What happened here?
Employee#1: We'll be robbed by friendly thief.
Officer#2 went outside to check SB Bus stop and cam4e back in.
Officer#2: I thought I saw that girl standing at bus stop, but she's not there now.
Employee#2: That criminal was very polite.
Officers: Polite criminal? What do you mean?
Passenger#1 (Male): They mean unlike other criminal, she ask kindly to cooperate or she will shoot us.
Officers: That is crazy.
4:59:00pm.
She got off at Lexington Av & 96th St and went home.
5:30:00pm.
Mrs. Yaukura: How was your first crime, honey?
Sakura: Excellent. I stole valuables including Happy Meal to go.
Mr. Yakura: Excellent plan. Let's all drink alcoholic together.
Mrs. Yakura had filled empty water and milk gallon bottles with wines, sakes, campaigns, and beers Sakura drank all of them and she was very drunk even thought she wasn't suppose to drink. She dank all of them quadruple times.
Thursday, January 4th. 12:00:00pm.
Sakura was very drank, but she was walking and talking normal. Sakura drank Chocolate Milk to cover her alcoholic smell. She was eating lunch with her best friend, Katie Hohnson in school cafeteria. Katie Johnson was dapted by Jamestone mother, Jessie Jamestone, who past away. Katie knows how to cook and knows relative of Jamestone because her stepmother prepare her for the worst.
Sakura: Katie, what are you doing after-school?
Katie: I'm free.
Sakura: Would you like to come study and have fun with me?
Katie: Sure, I'll meet you by the bus stop.
Sakura and Katie got on BxM1. Sakura dip MetroCard twice and they sit together. Sakura's MetroCard automatically filled up to $50- $60 value because it reach $25.
4:50:00pm.
Sakura and Katie got off at 96th St and went home together.
5:30:00pm.
They finish they're school homework.
6:00:00pm.
Katie: What kind game we should play?
Sakura: Let's play tug and you find. I'll county to twenty.
Katie: Okay.
Katie hid while Sakura counted.
Katie hid in the closet full of weapons.
Sakura:... Twenty!! Here I come, Katie.
Sakura went to look under the bed, behind the doors, and soon she came to closet fill with weapons.
She opens and finds Katie.
Sakura: I found you, Katie.
She tags Katie. As she tags, Katie, Crime Virus spread onto her and Katie became Criminal.
Katie; Let's do some crime.
Sakura: What kind of crime we should do?
Katie: How about this.
Katie tells her plan.
Katie: I pretend to be normal who got abdutected by your family. I contacy my relatives, and then you threat them to come to your house. Once they touch us, they become criminals immediately.
Sakura: How many relatives you have?
Katie; Four female relatives.
Sakura; That is good idea.
7:00:00pm.
Katie calls her relatives, Mary-Ann, Anna, Keiko and Sophie Jamestone. They lived together in Jamaica estate. Sophie answers call.
Sophie: Hello?
Katie (fakes): Help! I'll been kidnapped!
Sophie: Katie, is that you?
Katie (fakes): Yes.
Inside the Jamestone apartment, Sophie turns to other Jamestones girls.
Sophie: Listen to this.
Back in Yakura apartment, Katie was still on phone.
Katie: Help!! Mary-Ann, Anna, Keiko, and Sophie! I'll been abducted!!
Katie hands phone to Sakura.
Sakura: Come to 151 E. 97th St immediately or I'll kill your sister.
Sophie: OK. We'll come immediately.
Sakura: Just remember, NO COPS.
Sakura passes phone back to Katie.
Katie: If we see any cops, she will kill me.
Sophie: OK, sweeheart. We promise.
Sakura ties up Katie, but she make sure it not too tie.
Next, Sakura hides where she could spy on Jamestone family. Mr. and Mrs. Yakura also hide nearby and waiting for action of criminal surprise attack.
9:00:00pm.
Soon, Sophie, Mary-Ann, Anna, and Keiko entered the house. As they step in, they spotted Katie tied up in chair.
As Mary-Ann and Anna unties rope by legs, while Keiko unties hands, and Sophie unties around neck, their elbows touch Katie's body.
As their elbows touch, Crime Virus spread into all of them. As soon as they finish untying, they felt strange and became criminals.
Anna/Keiko/Mary-Ann/Sophie: We're Criminals.
Katie: Excellent, sisters. What would you suggest?
Anna: Let's take over Rikers Island Jail.
Mrs. Yakura: Excellent idea.
Sophie: I still have night shift from 6:30pm Friday to 6:30am Saturday.
Mr. Yakura: That's way cool idea.
Katie: Let me guess, Mom. We're going to take Q101R bus at different stop at different time.
Sophie: That's exactly correct, Katie. We didn't decided yet.
Mary-Ann: That means you'll be waiting for us at bus stop, right?
Sophie: Right.
Keiko: At exactly right moment, we planned to held Correction Officers, prisoners, and visitors as hostage.
Mr. Yakura: Next, we call cop and...
Katie: ... ask them to send one million dollars to release hostage
Sakura: ... plus bus as our gateaway vehicle.
Soon, Sophie made fake IDs for all of them.
Sophie called her boss and she hang up.
Sophie: Good news. My boss told me she needs eight volunteers to work full Saturday from Friday night.
Katie: Perfect plan.
Friday, January 5th, 5:45:00pm.
They gathered up at 28th St & Queens Plaza bus stop. They organized to crime group. They were all set for attack.
6:00:00pm.
Sophie got on Q101R bus.
6:20:00pm.
She got off at Rikers Island jail.
6:30:00pm.
Mary-Ann got on Q101R bus.
6:50:00pm.
she got off at Riker Island jail.
7:00:00pm.
Keiko got on Q101R bus.
7:20:00pm.
Keiko got off at Rikers Island jail.
7:30:00pm.
Anna and Katie got on Q101R bus.
7:48:00pm.
Anna got off at Rikers Island Parking Lot.
7:50:00pm.
Hiro got off at Rikers Island jail.
8:00:00pm.
Hiro got on Q101R bus.
8:20:00pm.
He got off at Rikers Island jail.
8:30:00pm.
Akira and Sakuara got on and they show their IDs to bus operators.
Akira: Excuse me, can you drop off us at booth on bridge?
Bus Operator: Of course.
8:49:00pm.
Bus Operator stops and opens door at booth.
Akira/Sakura: Thank you.
They put on their uniform, waiting for their assign job. They also got radio.
Sophie (on radio): Ready for plan half past noon on Saturday.
Yakura/Jamestone: 10-4, copy.
Saturday, January 6th, 12:30pm.
Sophie turns on emergency lock.
Mary-Ann, Katie held up guns, point toward drivers, guests, visitiors, employees.
Next, Mary-Ann and Katie closed the gate.
Next, Katie put police barrier at bridge & Rikers Island.
Akira and Sakura put barriers on both side of bridge, then hold their guns.
Next, Anna brings out gun, then put barriers after 12:38pm Q101R bus.
Next, they all turns up the volume on radio.
Sophie: ATTENTION, all prisoners, visitors, employees, drivers! We're armed terrorists hlding everyone in Rikers Island hostage. Bus Operators, make announcement to your passengers only and DO NOT LET THEM OFF OR WE'LL SHOT.
Inside stuck Q101R buses.
Passengers: What hell is going on?
Bus Operators: Attention! We're being held by armed terrorists.
Passengers: LET US OFF.
Bus Operator: Sorry, I cannot because they will shot passenger who gets out.
Just then, they spotted female passenger in taxi going southbound got off at bridge. As she did that, Sakura on the southbound booth, shot a fire toward a taxi and she went back inside.
12:12pm that arrives queens Plaza at 12:37pm and 12:21pm that arrives Queens Plaza at 12:46pm had taken over the 12:55pm departure and 1:05pm departure.
Q101R bus replacing 12;55pm departure was waiting.
Bus Operator: What's hell is going on in the Rikers Island?
Bus Operator tried to contact bus operators in island and parking lot zone, but no answer.
Bus operator also contact command center, but command center cannot reach them either.
Sophie calls 911.
911 Operator: 911. What's your emergency.
Sophie: We're armed terrorist holding hostage at entire Rikers Island. Please send a cop to Riker's Island with one million dollar and spare bus.
911 Operator-female (gasped): I'll dispatch them immediately.
Meanwhile at 911 Call Command Center, she connect to Police Department.
911 Operator- female (gapsed): Police Department, we have armed terrorist situation at Rikers Island facility. Terrorists demands one million dollars and spare bus.
Meanwhile, back in same Q101R bus that still stuck on befroe the Parking Lot overheard from the radio.
Bus Operator: Command Center, we have terrorist situation at Rikers Island. All the buses between Parking Lot and Riker's Island are being held.
Command Center: 10-4, copy that.
MTA Bus Company Service Alert
Posted 01/06/08, 1:20:20pm.
Due to crime activity, all Q101R bus service is suspended. As in result, following buses are affected. Q18 buses diverted to Broadway between Steinway & 54th sts. Q19, Q19A, Q66 buses are diverted to Broadway between Steinway & 74th St Bus Terminals. Q101 buses diverted to 35th Av/Northern Blvd between Steinway St & Marine Air Terminal.
NYCT Service Alert.
Posted: 01/06/08, 1:20:22pm.
Due to crimne activity at Riker's Island, (N) trains are turning around at Queensboro Plaza, and entire (W) service is suspended during this time. As in result, M60 bus is being diverted. As alternative, take downtown (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(A)(C)(D) to 42nd St, transfer to Queens-bound (7) train to 74th St-Broadway for Q33 and Q47 bus to LaGuardia Airport.
Meanwhile, inside the M60 bus pull open door at 2nd Av.
Bus Operators- Male: Attnetion, passengers! Due to crime activity at Riker's Island, there is no bus service on 21st, 31st, Steinway Sts north of Broadway/Northern Blvd. All M60 buses will be operating non-stop via Cross Bronx Expressway to Whitestone Bridge, Whitestone Expressway, Astoria Blvd, Northern Blvd, 83rd St, Astoria Blvd, 85th St, regular route at 23rd Av. Return trip will be going back through Whitestone Expressway and Cross Bronx Expressway to regular route at Triborough Bridge. Sorry for inconvenience.
Meanwhile, twenty-two-year-old Yuki Endo created a Huge Chocolate Cookie 'n' Cream Mint Ice Cream Piazza.
2:00:00pm.
Soon, Yuki with one officer driving a spare articulated bus with one million dollars led by police until both area.
Soon, Anna opens the barrier as bus enters bridge. Then, Sakura and Akira opens the barrier at bridge booth, then Katie and Keiko opens the barrier at bridge.
Next, Yuki climbs out of to roof of bus and stays flat.
Sophie restores Riker's Island jail to normal. Mary-Ann and Katie opens the gate.
Sophie, Mary-An,, Katie, Keiko, Hiro got on gateway bus. They saw one million dollars inside the bus. Sophie drives. As she approaches the bridge booth, Sakura and Akira returns barriers to original position, then gets on. When Sophie approach parking lot, Anna returns barriers to original position and hops on bus.
2:30:00pm.
Soon, all eight of them smelled food. They started eating that ice cream pizza.
3:00:00pm.
After they finish eating, Crime Viruses were dissolving.
All eight of them were confused.
Yuki Endo: Don't worry, girls and Hiro. Crime Viruses affected you.
All: Crime Viruses?
Yuki Endo: Yes. Crime Virus approach Sakura first, then followed by Yakura parent. Next, Katie got tag by Sakura and you Jamestone family's elbow touch diseased Sakura, and that made you do crime.
THE END FOR THIS STORY.
 

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Ugh, usually the goal is to create the best story, not the longest. Also, usually best to use minimal redundancies, and to try to keep it short. I'm not against 1000 page books, but, a story that is long just for the sake of being long is garbage.

Write your long story, then edit out all the inconsequential frivolous stuff. Then find out if it's any good.
 

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Had to pad myself in the back the other day after writing my friend a 1300 word email... I was so proud of myself.
 

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If i make it to a second paragraph in a post here, i'm proud and i'll defend my post to the death to any and all attackers and skeptics alike.
 

BladeVenom

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I'm not sure where you get the idea that 394 pages is the longest story. Most of the books I've read recently have been longer than that.
 

BladeVenom

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maybe he has really big pages

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http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2010/jan/26/klencke-atlas-british-library-exhibition

Lets see him top that.
 

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Meanwhile, twenty-two-year-old Yuki Endo created a Huge Chocolate Cookie 'n' Cream Mint Ice Cream Piazza.

I don't think any of you can deny the genius of this sentence.
 

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Here is example.

1. Crime Virus
Wednesday, January 3rd. 4:00:00am.
In 151 East 97th St, there live five-year-old girl named Sakura Yakura. She was tall for her age, and she was beautiful girl. She had shiny long, gold-blond hair that touches her shoulders, and she had beatiful blue eyes. She lives with her twenty-two moter, Akira Yakura, and thirty-one year-old father, Hiro Yakura. While Sakura was eating delicious Japanese breakfast, something happened. Crime Virus entered Sakura's mouth through rice. At soon as she finish eating it, she become criminal. She knows she become criminal, but don't want her parent to know yet, so she put on friendly act.
Sakura: (lies) Mom, Dad, I feel sick. Can you feel my head?
Mrs. Yakura: Sure.
Mrs. Yakura touches her forehead while Mr. Yakura holds her hands. As they did that, Crime Viruses spread into them and they turn into criminals immediately.
Yakura family: We're Yakura Family going to do crime!
Sakura goes to P.S. 98 Shorack Appoch on 212th St. Her parents signed up for Easy Express Bus MetroCard. Her own MetroCard just arrive. They all had guns, ski masks.
8:07:00am.
She got on BxM1 bus.
8:23:00am.
She got off Broadway & 207th St, and she walk to her schhool. She already made friends there.
8:30:00am.
In school, she acts as normal student, so nobody will suspect she is criminal.
3:45:00pm.
School finish.
4:05:00pm.
At hidden place, Sakura put on her ski mask over on her face, enters 207th St Branch of McDonald's.
Employees and passengers were shocked when Sakura smiles and pulls out her gun.
Sakura: Excuse me, can I get your Happy Meals to go, well as all your valuables. If you do not cooperate, I will shoot you.
Everyone oby. The deposit cashes, credit cards, jewerlries, expensive watches, cell phones, I-pods, MP3 Players, laptop, and empoloyees put Happy Meal inside with their money.
Sakura: Thank you very much.
Sakura exit and fled and hid in the park, then took off her mask. Next, she put on school gym uniform and she went to Broadway & 207th St stop stop.
Meanwhile, employee at McDonald call police.
Police Officers from 34th Precint passd suspect although they didn't notice her because she change outfit.
4:37:00pm.
She got on BxM1.
4:40pm.
Officers were at crime scene at McDonald's.
Officer#1: What happened here?
Employee#1: We'll be robbed by friendly thief.
Officer#2 went outside to check SB Bus stop and cam4e back in.
Officer#2: I thought I saw that girl standing at bus stop, but she's not there now.
Employee#2: That criminal was very polite.
Officers: Polite criminal? What do you mean?
Passenger#1 (Male): They mean unlike other criminal, she ask kindly to cooperate or she will shoot us.
Officers: That is crazy.
4:59:00pm.
She got off at Lexington Av & 96th St and went home.
5:30:00pm.
Mrs. Yaukura: How was your first crime, honey?
Sakura: Excellent. I stole valuables including Happy Meal to go.
Mr. Yakura: Excellent plan. Let's all drink alcoholic together.
Mrs. Yakura had filled empty water and milk gallon bottles with wines, sakes, campaigns, and beers Sakura drank all of them and she was very drunk even thought she wasn't suppose to drink. She dank all of them quadruple times.
Thursday, January 4th. 12:00:00pm.
Sakura was very drank, but she was walking and talking normal. Sakura drank Chocolate Milk to cover her alcoholic smell. She was eating lunch with her best friend, Katie Hohnson in school cafeteria. Katie Johnson was dapted by Jamestone mother, Jessie Jamestone, who past away. Katie knows how to cook and knows relative of Jamestone because her stepmother prepare her for the worst.
Sakura: Katie, what are you doing after-school?
Katie: I'm free.
Sakura: Would you like to come study and have fun with me?
Katie: Sure, I'll meet you by the bus stop.
Sakura and Katie got on BxM1. Sakura dip MetroCard twice and they sit together. Sakura's MetroCard automatically filled up to $50- $60 value because it reach $25.
4:50:00pm.
Sakura and Katie got off at 96th St and went home together.
5:30:00pm.
They finish they're school homework.
6:00:00pm.
Katie: What kind game we should play?
Sakura: Let's play tug and you find. I'll county to twenty.
Katie: Okay.
Katie hid while Sakura counted.
Katie hid in the closet full of weapons.
Sakura:... Twenty!! Here I come, Katie.
Sakura went to look under the bed, behind the doors, and soon she came to closet fill with weapons.
She opens and finds Katie.
Sakura: I found you, Katie.
She tags Katie. As she tags, Katie, Crime Virus spread onto her and Katie became Criminal.
Katie; Let's do some crime.
Sakura: What kind of crime we should do?
Katie: How about this.
Katie tells her plan.
Katie: I pretend to be normal who got abdutected by your family. I contacy my relatives, and then you threat them to come to your house. Once they touch us, they become criminals immediately.
Sakura: How many relatives you have?
Katie; Four female relatives.
Sakura; That is good idea.
7:00:00pm.
Katie calls her relatives, Mary-Ann, Anna, Keiko and Sophie Jamestone. They lived together in Jamaica estate. Sophie answers call.
Sophie: Hello?
Katie (fakes): Help! I'll been kidnapped!
Sophie: Katie, is that you?
Katie (fakes): Yes.
Inside the Jamestone apartment, Sophie turns to other Jamestones girls.
Sophie: Listen to this.
Back in Yakura apartment, Katie was still on phone.
Katie: Help!! Mary-Ann, Anna, Keiko, and Sophie! I'll been abducted!!
Katie hands phone to Sakura.
Sakura: Come to 151 E. 97th St immediately or I'll kill your sister.
Sophie: OK. We'll come immediately.
Sakura: Just remember, NO COPS.
Sakura passes phone back to Katie.
Katie: If we see any cops, she will kill me.
Sophie: OK, sweeheart. We promise.
Sakura ties up Katie, but she make sure it not too tie.
Next, Sakura hides where she could spy on Jamestone family. Mr. and Mrs. Yakura also hide nearby and waiting for action of criminal surprise attack.
9:00:00pm.
Soon, Sophie, Mary-Ann, Anna, and Keiko entered the house. As they step in, they spotted Katie tied up in chair.
As Mary-Ann and Anna unties rope by legs, while Keiko unties hands, and Sophie unties around neck, their elbows touch Katie's body.
As their elbows touch, Crime Virus spread into all of them. As soon as they finish untying, they felt strange and became criminals.
Anna/Keiko/Mary-Ann/Sophie: We're Criminals.
Katie: Excellent, sisters. What would you suggest?
Anna: Let's take over Rikers Island Jail.
Mrs. Yakura: Excellent idea.
Sophie: I still have night shift from 6:30pm Friday to 6:30am Saturday.
Mr. Yakura: That's way cool idea.
Katie: Let me guess, Mom. We're going to take Q101R bus at different stop at different time.
Sophie: That's exactly correct, Katie. We didn't decided yet.
Mary-Ann: That means you'll be waiting for us at bus stop, right?
Sophie: Right.
Keiko: At exactly right moment, we planned to held Correction Officers, prisoners, and visitors as hostage.
Mr. Yakura: Next, we call cop and...
Katie: ... ask them to send one million dollars to release hostage
Sakura: ... plus bus as our gateaway vehicle.
Soon, Sophie made fake IDs for all of them.
Sophie called her boss and she hang up.
Sophie: Good news. My boss told me she needs eight volunteers to work full Saturday from Friday night.
Katie: Perfect plan.
Friday, January 5th, 5:45:00pm.
They gathered up at 28th St & Queens Plaza bus stop. They organized to crime group. They were all set for attack.
6:00:00pm.
Sophie got on Q101R bus.
6:20:00pm.
She got off at Rikers Island jail.
6:30:00pm.
Mary-Ann got on Q101R bus.
6:50:00pm.
she got off at Riker Island jail.
7:00:00pm.
Keiko got on Q101R bus.
7:20:00pm.
Keiko got off at Rikers Island jail.
7:30:00pm.
Anna and Katie got on Q101R bus.
7:48:00pm.
Anna got off at Rikers Island Parking Lot.
7:50:00pm.
Hiro got off at Rikers Island jail.
8:00:00pm.
Hiro got on Q101R bus.
8:20:00pm.
He got off at Rikers Island jail.
8:30:00pm.
Akira and Sakuara got on and they show their IDs to bus operators.
Akira: Excuse me, can you drop off us at booth on bridge?
Bus Operator: Of course.
8:49:00pm.
Bus Operator stops and opens door at booth.
Akira/Sakura: Thank you.
They put on their uniform, waiting for their assign job. They also got radio.
Sophie (on radio): Ready for plan half past noon on Saturday.
Yakura/Jamestone: 10-4, copy.
Saturday, January 6th, 12:30pm.
Sophie turns on emergency lock.
Mary-Ann, Katie held up guns, point toward drivers, guests, visitiors, employees.
Next, Mary-Ann and Katie closed the gate.
Next, Katie put police barrier at bridge & Rikers Island.
Akira and Sakura put barriers on both side of bridge, then hold their guns.
Next, Anna brings out gun, then put barriers after 12:38pm Q101R bus.
Next, they all turns up the volume on radio.
Sophie: ATTENTION, all prisoners, visitors, employees, drivers! We're armed terrorists hlding everyone in Rikers Island hostage. Bus Operators, make announcement to your passengers only and DO NOT LET THEM OFF OR WE'LL SHOT.
Inside stuck Q101R buses.
Passengers: What hell is going on?
Bus Operators: Attention! We're being held by armed terrorists.
Passengers: LET US OFF.
Bus Operator: Sorry, I cannot because they will shot passenger who gets out.
Just then, they spotted female passenger in taxi going southbound got off at bridge. As she did that, Sakura on the southbound booth, shot a fire toward a taxi and she went back inside.
12:12pm that arrives queens Plaza at 12:37pm and 12:21pm that arrives Queens Plaza at 12:46pm had taken over the 12:55pm departure and 1:05pm departure.
Q101R bus replacing 12;55pm departure was waiting.
Bus Operator: What's hell is going on in the Rikers Island?
Bus Operator tried to contact bus operators in island and parking lot zone, but no answer.
Bus operator also contact command center, but command center cannot reach them either.
Sophie calls 911.
911 Operator: 911. What's your emergency.
Sophie: We're armed terrorist holding hostage at entire Rikers Island. Please send a cop to Riker's Island with one million dollar and spare bus.
911 Operator-female (gasped): I'll dispatch them immediately.
Meanwhile at 911 Call Command Center, she connect to Police Department.
911 Operator- female (gapsed): Police Department, we have armed terrorist situation at Rikers Island facility. Terrorists demands one million dollars and spare bus.
Meanwhile, back in same Q101R bus that still stuck on befroe the Parking Lot overheard from the radio.
Bus Operator: Command Center, we have terrorist situation at Rikers Island. All the buses between Parking Lot and Riker's Island are being held.
Command Center: 10-4, copy that.
MTA Bus Company Service Alert
Posted 01/06/08, 1:20:20pm.
Due to crime activity, all Q101R bus service is suspended. As in result, following buses are affected. Q18 buses diverted to Broadway between Steinway & 54th sts. Q19, Q19A, Q66 buses are diverted to Broadway between Steinway & 74th St Bus Terminals. Q101 buses diverted to 35th Av/Northern Blvd between Steinway St & Marine Air Terminal.
NYCT Service Alert.
Posted: 01/06/08, 1:20:22pm.
Due to crimne activity at Riker's Island, (N) trains are turning around at Queensboro Plaza, and entire (W) service is suspended during this time. As in result, M60 bus is being diverted. As alternative, take downtown (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(A)(C)(D) to 42nd St, transfer to Queens-bound (7) train to 74th St-Broadway for Q33 and Q47 bus to LaGuardia Airport.
Meanwhile, inside the M60 bus pull open door at 2nd Av.
Bus Operators- Male: Attnetion, passengers! Due to crime activity at Riker's Island, there is no bus service on 21st, 31st, Steinway Sts north of Broadway/Northern Blvd. All M60 buses will be operating non-stop via Cross Bronx Expressway to Whitestone Bridge, Whitestone Expressway, Astoria Blvd, Northern Blvd, 83rd St, Astoria Blvd, 85th St, regular route at 23rd Av. Return trip will be going back through Whitestone Expressway and Cross Bronx Expressway to regular route at Triborough Bridge. Sorry for inconvenience.
Meanwhile, twenty-two-year-old Yuki Endo created a Huge Chocolate Cookie 'n' Cream Mint Ice Cream Piazza.
2:00:00pm.
Soon, Yuki with one officer driving a spare articulated bus with one million dollars led by police until both area.
Soon, Anna opens the barrier as bus enters bridge. Then, Sakura and Akira opens the barrier at bridge booth, then Katie and Keiko opens the barrier at bridge.
Next, Yuki climbs out of to roof of bus and stays flat.
Sophie restores Riker's Island jail to normal. Mary-Ann and Katie opens the gate.
Sophie, Mary-An,, Katie, Keiko, Hiro got on gateway bus. They saw one million dollars inside the bus. Sophie drives. As she approaches the bridge booth, Sakura and Akira returns barriers to original position, then gets on. When Sophie approach parking lot, Anna returns barriers to original position and hops on bus.
2:30:00pm.
Soon, all eight of them smelled food. They started eating that ice cream pizza.
3:00:00pm.
After they finish eating, Crime Viruses were dissolving.
All eight of them were confused.
Yuki Endo: Don't worry, girls and Hiro. Crime Viruses affected you.
All: Crime Viruses?
Yuki Endo: Yes. Crime Virus approach Sakura first, then followed by Yakura parent. Next, Katie got tag by Sakura and you Jamestone family's elbow touch diseased Sakura, and that made you do crime.
THE END FOR THIS STORY.

I've shortened it for you. I'm helpful that way.

While Sakura was eating delicious Japanese breakfast, something happened. Crime Virus entered Sakura's mouth through rice.

Next, Katie got tag by Sakura and you Jamestone family's elbow touch diseased Sakura, and that made you do crime.
THE END

I see Miley Cyrus starring in the movie version, with Jim Carrey as the virus.
 

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