[MUSIC] Help With This Song I Wrote

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: herm0016
nice job. your songs just need a little more punch. the vocals are another insterment when you mix, don't think of it as speech, but another piece in the band. you can do that by the way you mix it. you can eq out the breathy sounds on the voice and kick up the base line a bit. i think with a few more pieces you could be great.

yea, i know what you mean, these two recordings were done more for the purpose of conveying the idea of the song rather than acting as a full production. So when i ask which is better what i really mean is which one do you think has the most potential.

~ss

 

[Kirby]

What kind of guitar do you play?

 

[Oxaqata]

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[supersloth]

Originally posted by: Oxaqata
Megans song (I prefer its upbeat style)

which one? they're both megan's song...

LOL i've screwed up this thread so bad. I made two songs called megan's song, then i made a poll where Song 2 comes before Song 1 which confused some people into voting for the wrong one. why would i do this ?!? sigh

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: nkgreen
What kind of guitar do you play?

I have a taylor 414-ce and a takamine G-series

 

[biggestmuff]

David, are you going to do more work on song 1?

 

[Kirby]

Originally posted by: supersloth

Originally posted by: nkgreen
What kind of guitar do you play?

I have a taylor 414-ce and a takamine G-series

whoa. nice!

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: biggestmuff
David, are you going to do more work on song 1?

I'm hoping to get to re-record it in a professional studio someday, but until then i'll probably just leave the recording the way it is. Who knows though, i might decide to mess with it one day