Misguided noob?

[oiprocs]

Funny the way things turn out
When you have a great idea and instead it burns out
I guess I tried too hard to add some spice to the forum
Cause in return all responses told me I don't fit in this quorum
"Your thoughts are too lame, your prophecies bring you to shame,
this isn't a post game, and lifers couldn't care less about your name"
Ouch went my ego, I got slapped around by so many people
It seems they don't feel to concur
that my posts should even occur
So perhaps I'll give in to their demands
Take a lesson from all these commands
So many lessons my brain expands
Now my ego's back and it stands
To make another rhyme and get blasted by ATOT fans!

 

[DangerAardvark]

Roses are red.
violets are blue.
You're a wise and beautiful woman.

 

[Goosemaster]

ah the punching bag at the back of your throat
expectations of oratory grandeur,
expecting defeat by design

such melodies that should flow freely from your hole
mots de verite that should leave other holes silenced in awe
and yet

and yet we speak our minds in arrogant fashion
believing that we are truth's keeper
that all that is and shall be said,
are unquestionable words for all the eager eardrums that must fed

that moment inevitably arrives
when pride falls
rhythm dies
one is silenced
in awe of something that one cannot explain
of a magnitude that one cannot even hope to accertain

in this moment, this little event in time,
what defines and what can serve to redefine is how you respond

lambasted your ego may be
but alas, remember past arrogance
remember your decisive and irrefutable words
so that we may have, always,
an excuse to kick your ass

 

[aplefka]

What the hell is this? Open Mic night?

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: aplefka
What the hell is this? Open Mic night?

@ apollo...oh sh!..they're throwing chairs again...

 

[MartyMcFly3]

I was sleeping like a lamb
When suddenly I heard a slam
Up against one of my walls
Moaning coming down the halls
A rocking noise; a steady beat
Knew I was in for a long "treat"

Turn on my Zune to tune them out
But who can sleep to No Doubt?
So here I sit, my sleep disturbed
Posting on AT, a little perturbed
It's 3AM, my roommate done?
Nope, just the end of round number one

 

[nageov3t]

you can't rhyme out with out... they're the same word.

 

[Soundmanred]

Did MySpace and EmoForums shut down for the night or something?

 

[oiprocs]

Originally posted by: Soundmanred
Did MySpace and EmoForums shut down for the night or something?

No dude, this is ATOT. Get over yourself. We don't cater to the topics you need. We cater to the ones we want.

 

[Captante]

Originally posted by: DangerAardvark
Roses are red.
violets are blue.
You're a wise and beautiful woman.

:laugh:

 

[moshquerade]

Originally posted by: oiprocs
Funny the way things turn out
When you have a great idea and instead it burns out
I guess I tried too hard to add some spice to the forum
Cause in return all responses told me I don't fit in this quorum
"Your thoughts are too lame, your prophecies bring you to shame,
this isn't a post game, and lifers couldn't care less about your name"
Ouch went my ego, I got slapped around by so many people
It seems they don't feel to concur
that my posts should even occur
So perhaps I'll give in to their demands
Take a lesson from all these commands
So many lessons my brain expands
Now my ego's back and it stands
To make another rhyme and get blasted by ATOT fans!

Eminem would so pay to have the rights to that verse.

 

[Canai]

I was neffing at work
acting like a jerk
neffing at work,
but hey, it's a perk!

when some noob came on
la la la la la
singing a song
la la la la la
he's so wrong
la la la la la
and can't write a song to save his
liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiifffeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

have you ever thought
there's another way out there
so instead of writing poems
and rhyming every line,

say what you mean to say
say what comes naturally
escape from mother goose
and learn to write with truth

I smoked too much weed today
before I came to work
I have no idea what's going on
but hey, who cares, right?

Cause I be spitting mad unrhymes
to a bunch of nerds and geeks
I don't pretend I'm a cool rap kid
instead I eat a bagel

 

[soccerballtux]

Forums across the internet are like this. Don't take it personally, it grows you up and makes you a man. I'm almost to the point where I don't get irritated with the retarded comments.

 

[Canai]

Originally posted by: soccerballtux
Forums across the internet are like this. Don't take it personally, it grows you up and makes you a man. I'm almost to the point where I don't get irritated with the retarded comments.

I was going to try to come up with some retarded comment to irritate you, but I got nothing.

 

[YOyoYOhowsDAjello]

Originally posted by: soccerballtux
it grows you up and makes you a man.

:laugh: