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Eh, I don't really feel like it. By the way, you don't see anyone posting "Critique my incomplete political science paper" here...'cause I know if I did, I'd definitely feel like a tool. Who wants to read someone else's homework, especially if it's not done?
 
see: Tobias Wolf "Bullet in the Brain"


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i didnt read very closely. page four, first paragraph. that comma should be an ellipses.

im too tired to get into other nitpicky things like that. the content is implausable and the character doesnt seem to have a fixed personality. and it doesnt appear as if that is particularly intentional. strangely, this character has amazing moments of self-realization that seem wildly inappropriate for someone who is supposedly a slacker. there is very little substance to his recounting of what happens and im pretty sure this doesnt technically count as a monologue.
 
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