K, thanks.

[Swag1138]

Thank you for reinforcing my love for the human race.

Seriously guys, I love each and every one of you.

 

[Ryan]

Bah - faint chorus, no hook, and it's not catchy. Better luck next time.

 

[KingNothing]

Originally posted by: rbloedow
Bah - faint chorus, no hook, and it's not catchy. Better luck next time.

Sounds like a lot of the music on the radio to me. Who knows, you could make it big!

 

[Swag1138]

Originally posted by: rbloedow
Bah - faint chorus, no hook, and it's not catchy. Better luck next time.

Im more of an indie/art rock guy. I dont go for catchy.

 

[Ryan]

Originally posted by: KingNothing

Originally posted by: rbloedow Bah - faint chorus, no hook, and it's not catchy. Better luck next time.

Sounds like a lot of the music on the radio to me. Who knows, you could make it big!

True. Swag - you're gonna be the next one hit wonder!

 

[Swag1138]

And I only spent like 5 minutes on this thing. I just got off the phone with a guy and was pissed off.

 

[minendo]

AT member on American Idol 2? :Q

 

[Ryan]

Originally posted by: minendo
AT member on American Idol 2? :Q

No, they don't care about song writing abilities - we'd have to know if he's got the looks and could sing moderatly well.

 

[Turin39789]

i wrote this song
it kinda sucks
needs some tweaking
sang old time country-ish
drawl the lords

Lord, stop killing me
Ah said lord stop killing me
Well you beat my down into the ground
covered me up with mud
left me with no right direction to go
and now i've had enough
Ah said lord you're killin me

Left my school like a southern fool
didn'nt know why i was there
layin' down furthest down
Oh lord I sure was scared
I said lord stop killin me

Well ya took my job and my sense of peace
took away all my nicities
just one thing that you couldn't a do'd
turn that woman and turned her good
little ol thing beyond your might
that loving look in her sight
loord ya killin me
Ah said lord stop killin me

Just one thing that you should'nt a do'd
turned that woman and turned her good
little ol thing that i did need
was that womans nicities
just one thing that you shouldn't a do'd
took my reason for staying good
one ol thing I couldnt take

Oh lord you sure made a mistake
loord stop killin me
my loord took my nicities
ah said lord, youre a mockery
loord youre no good

 

[Turin39789]

but no one even bothers to make fun of me