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Just came out with new advertisment flyer for my business

It's fairly obvious that instead of some dude smiling like a retard, you should put a hot naked chick holding a notebook
Your sales will jump through the roof
 
the dude looking like a douchebag down in the corner could go

edit: unless it's a picture of you or a loved one, and for that I sincerely apologize 😛
 
I'd start with changing MAC to Mac, because it's not an acronym... someone who is fully qualified to work on them should know that. 😉

And don't use funky fonts.
 
Originally posted by: dugweb
the dude looking like a douchebag down in the corner could go

edit: unless it's a picture of you or a loved one, and for that I sincerely apologize 😛
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Yup, replace him with a hot chick.
 
And Geek Squad should not have an apostrophe or an s. If you insist on making it plural, don't put the apostrophe in there. It doesn't work as a possessive in that sentence.
 
Originally posted by: paulney
It's fairly obvious that instead of some dude smiling like a retard, you should put a hot naked chick holding a notebook
Your sales will jump through the roof
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another vote for hott naked chicks.
Otherwise it looks good, very clean. Do people actually pay $70 to clean up spyware?

mugs, have you heard of the edit button?
 
Using black text to emphasize words in a sentence full of blue letters doesn't make sense. Use bold if you want to emphasize it, or change the sentence to black and the emphasis to blue.
 
"Computer fix offers" should be "Computer repair offers"

Edit: nevermind, I just realized that's the name of the company. 😉

Happy! I edited. 😛
 
Originally posted by: illusion88
mugs, have you heard of the edit button?
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Do you want my help? I prefer not to edit because a lot of times an edit gets lost when there's replies after it.

EDIT! Whoops didn't realize I wasn't replying to the OP. 😉
 
$70 for spyware removal is low if you do it on-site. If you bring the computer home with you or make them bring it to you, that's ok. Do you refund their money if you're not able to get everything off? At least make them aware that in some cases the only way to get rid of it is reformatting.
 
Originally posted by: mugs
$70 for spyware removal is low if you do it on-site. If you bring the computer home with you or make them bring it to you, that's ok. Do you refund their money if you're not able to get everything off? At least make them aware that in some cases the only way to get rid of it is reformatting.
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Mugs,
Thanks a lot for your much valuble feedback.
😀
And, call me lucky, but the only time I might run into problems removing ALL spyware is when the PC runs Windows 98 or ME. Fortunately, this does not happen very often these days.
 
Originally posted by: George P Burdell
how much did you pay for that domain name? or was it up for grabs?
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I was lucky to get my hands on computerfix.org long time ago...
Could not afford the .com name though...
🙁
 
Why does guarantee word wrap after satisfaction? It looks like there is enough room for it to fit.

That and I would pick a different bullet style. Make them circles or something. Just seems like it would look better and give each one more emphasis.
 
Wow, that's a pretty good price for removing spyware. Do you just back their data up and reformat their computer or do you actually remove the spyware? I do it for a living and I would not be able to remove the spyware within an hour. It take's much more time than that sometimes.
 
"Over 7 years of IT experience available to serve you"

That sounds jacked. Maybe take away "available".

But whatever, your coming for PC repair not English lessons.😉
 
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