Is this good enough Pretender?

[urbantechie]

My Post:

When working on a computer, many people tend to get headaches, eyestains and even back pains. It is important to know that safety while working on a computer is carefully reconized. I think, limiting your time on the computer will also increase pleasure and decrease any pains caused by computer use.

Is that a good enough paragrapgh for you, you damn english freak!!!

 

[ltk007]

<< Is that a good enough paragrapgh for you, you damn english freak!!! >>


Spell paragraph right and that is one hell of a post.

Oh, and recognize is spelled wrong too.

Oh yeah, get rid of the comma after &quot;computer&quot; in the first sentance.

Also, get rid of the comma after &quot;I think&quot;.

 

[urbantechie]

Hehe, the post is inspiered by my current eyestrain I have from raping in CS!!

 

[ltk007]

You spelled inspired wrong.

 

[veryape]

You have eyestains? Does that hurt?

 

[ltk007]

Damn, I missed one.

 

[urbantechie]

You don't know what eyestrains are?

 

[SuperGroove]

Urban,

You weren't playing like 20 minutes ago were you?(11:40 your time)

Paul

 

[urbantechie]

Dude, I was playing all day today..taking little breaks, no I wasn't playing..I had to stop, damn headache

 

[veryape]

You wrote eyestains.

 

[urbantechie]

DAMNIT!! Eyestrains, headaches..same damn thing ok!!!??? :|

 

[duragezic]

Are you running a decent refresh rate? I know you said you were on all day but I sometimes sit on my computer for a long time and am fine since I got this new monitor and am running at 85hz.

Man that was horrible before at 1024x768@60hz on a 15&quot; for several years. Ugh.

 

[LordMaul]

Hey ITK007...try spelling &quot;Sentence&quot; right....lol...&quot;In a small paragrapgh, Urbantechie wrote about his eyestains in a short sentance&quot;....LOL

 

[Pretender]

I was just hinting to certain people who like to post things that either are completely neffish or are seemingly written by someone on speed, a few things they should do to make their posts more legible.

BTW, urban, it was a good paragraph, but it was useless.

Nef score - 22% (out of 100%)


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