How's This for a flame?!!!

[StageLeft]

giggling beasts who sired you and then killed themselves in recognition of what they had done.

haha, sounds like Wesley at the end of the Princess Bride to the king.

Would that a hawk pick you up, drive its beak into your brain, and upon finding it rancid set you loose to fly briefly before spattering the ocean rocks with the frothy pink shame of your ignoble blood.

OMFG HAHAHHAA

 

[Looney]

How about some line breaks?

 

[AbsolutDealage]

Originally posted by: Fausto
I've seen better...

Quit spraying spittle and train yourself to shut the f*ck up
......
Now, FVCK OFF.

Yea, that is much better.

 

[SWScorch]

It had a few great spots, but for the most part was repetitive and dull. Had it been written in a more engaging manner, and with more segueways, it would be far classier. I found the lack of transitional sentences and ideas to be disconcerting.

 

[Kev]

none of those flames were good. i prefer short and sweet, like:

"Why don't you go die in a bus accident."

 

[Zombie]

LackCash, for your information, you will not get away with this. It has to stop right there. Enjoy until your time is up

 

[LackCash]

LackCash, for your information, you will not get away with this. It has to stop right there. Enjoy until your time is up

What did I do? Are you a mod?

 

[dighn]

Originally posted by: LackCash

LackCash, for your information, you will not get away with this. It has to stop right there. Enjoy until your time is up

What did I do? Are you a mod?

inside joke

 

[TheBoyBlunder]

It's very creative...but too damn long.

 

[Amorphus]

Originally posted by: LackCash

LackCash, for your information, you will not get away with this. It has to stop right there. Enjoy until your time is up

What did I do? Are you a mod?

I am.

Bwahahahahahaha!!! Now I will send you the cleaning bill for making me spit my beer all over my monitor.

Sarcastic Mod

 

[Ulfwald]

Paragraphs are your friends.

 

[Gravity]

Bannage?

 

[dighn]

why was this locked before?

 

[Evadman]

Mods are in a great mood tonight

:beer: for the Mods!

 

[halik]

you suck at flaming, i read 2 words and lost interest

 

[DrPizza]

I might have read the original flame, but obviously, the OP hasn't heard of paragraphs (sheesh, and he's calling someone stupid)

 

[LackCash]

I didn't write it.

 

[ThePresence]

Holy hell you got bigass issues.

 

[conjur]

Originally posted by: ThePresence
Holy hell you got bigass issues.

Holy hell you bumped an old thread!

 

[GroundZero]

Nothing but long-winded drivel,
get bent

 

[bootymac]

I am the Watchful Mod, and I have the biggest and baddest FLAMETHROWER of anyone here. Members cower when I pull it out and fire it up. Bwahahahahahaha!!!
Watchful Mod

My flamethrower throws more flame than your flamethrower biatch!!

 

[Yax]

Like many, I didn't read the whole thing but I'll bet there's not even a twist at the end so I give it a BORING! THUMBS DOWN!