How can I improve this web site?

[Riprorin]

Thanks for the help! I'm a rank amateur!

 

[Riprorin]

Any more tips?

Web Site

 

[Riprorin]

^^

 

[sillymofo]

Well, in my opinion:

1. The site looks plain, even though there are pictures and text, but they do not blend together.
2. You can definitely use a different font for your Header (even the whole page), something that would flow with the products.
3. Try to create different pages, and place your contact info at the bottom, in one line seperated by <hr>
4. Possibly looking into use of tables and placement of text and pics a little better, i.e. alternating.
5. The pages doesn't look alive, what I meant is that it doesn't grab the attention of most people. The overall tone of the site is kinda boring.

hope that helps.

 

[Encryptic]

- The intro text needs to be broken up with some extra lines. It just doesn't read well the way it is now.

- Ditch the tildes. They just don't work the way you have them, IMHO.

- Make sure you change the title of the page. Nothing screams "I am a web design noob" like a page title that says "Untitled" or "Page 1".

- Definitely make your page narrower. Not everyone is in 1600x1200. I personally run 1024x768 and the page looks OK to me, but the 800x600 people will probably be scrolling over.

- Try using bulleted lists for the Eyeglass Leashes and Eyeglass Loops/ID Holders section. That may help make it look a little neater.

Other than that, not a bad start.

 

[Riprorin]

Thanks for the suggestions.

I think I'll just turn it over to her and let her do with it as she will.

Web Site

 

[DannyBoy]

Originally posted by: Riprorin


As you can see, I have no skill or experience designing a web site:

It shows....

Try changing the title of the page too...

 

[Riprorin]

I'm going to let my friend title it.

Hey, go easy, I'm just doing this for fun to help out a friend. I'm not planning on quiting my day job!

 

[AgaBoogaBoo]

Higher quality images wouldn't hurt

 

[mjquilly]

mmmm..put some pictures of the items in use??? that or have the url redirect to this web site

 

[fs5]

Currently, the line consists of:

Eyeglass Leashes
They are sure to turn heads! In Adult and children's sizes (SO cute!!)
-Adult (30 inches): $30
-Childrens (18 inches): $20

Eyeglass Loops/ID Holder
Can be worn either of 2 ways:
-Eyeglass Loop - For those who just like to know where they are.?but prefer not to where a 'leash'! Just slip
your glasses through the 'loop' until you need them! Looks like an 'artsy' necklace!
OR
-ID Badge Holder - If you've GOT to wear it......you might as well have fun with it!! GREAT for nurses, etc!! $30

clean it up.... organize the information better. use list tags at the minimum.