Honest opinions on my business card

[aidanjm]

Originally posted by: Injury
Now you've replaced a worthless background image with junky clipart and images found on google image search. Once again, do not use images like that. Use a pattern background of sorts if you aren't a designer.

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Be honest... how old are you?

don't be such a critical a$$hole.

in fact, his first design would have printed up just fine. It's pretty easy to read reversed out text on a blue background.

 

[ViviTheMage]

latest try looks very professional.

 

[aidanjm]

Originally posted by: kasia00
hard to READ

BLUE + WHITE? not good myf riend

when it is printed, reversed out white text on a darksih background is reasonably easy to read.

 

[ai42]

Your trying too hard. Business cards are supposed to be fairly simple. You are trying to put too much graphics etc into it. Maybe a logo but judging by your previous examples your logo would be too busy.

 

[aidanjm]

Originally posted by: Injury

Originally posted by: enyce2k9
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d8/enyce2k9/Clipboardx.jpg latest try

*sigh*

I'm done.

stop being such a design snob.

 

[aidanjm]

Originally posted by: enyce2k9
last fix http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d8/enyce2k9/conceptcopy.jpg

It conveys all the required info, it's easy to read, and it would probably be cheap to get printed up (cheaper than full color).

The only thing I would change is I would keep the text you had on one of the earlier designsr: "On-site PC troubleshooting, upgrades, repairs and training"... I think you should keep this text because it gives an immediate, clear explanation of the services you are offering.