Help me with this song I wrote

[supersloth]

does anyone have any complaints about the strumming being too loud? had another forum tell me this.

 

[KB]

Originally posted by: supersloth
does anyone have any complaints about the strumming being too loud? had another forum tell me this.

I would agree during the chorus it is a bit loud... and a little fast, but that maybe just me.

But for the most of it: "I dug it dog".

 

[supersloth]

bump for late night crowd

 

[rbV5]

Pretty damn good

I like the strumming, overall it sounds good. The instruments could use a little seperation which may be why some can't hear the Bass and the drums are a little lost. I can hear the Bass fine, but it could use more definition.

Nice job!