narzy
Elite Member
I like to write every once and a while, tho I have so little time in the day to do much of it. but when I do, I have ways of building onto topics when I have severe writers block, and sometimes it gets interesting. here is an excerpt of a building process I did, just for some fun reading, and please feel free to post your thoughts on the subject, and perhaps some of your own writings, or writing tricks you use.
10. The mall, a large hallway crowded with eager fast paced people unaware of their next destination.
11. The odor of antiperspirants wearing off lingers in the air though slightly masked by the aroma of colognes and perfumes that have been tested throughout the day.
12. The taste of commercial grade cheap cleaners hovers on your taste buds mixed with the mornings unsold goods from the food court.
13. You can cut the humidity from warm bodies moving all around you with a knife leaving you feeling sticky.
14. the nauseating sounds fill the air of crying babies, whining children, angry teenagers, and ignorant adults all around you, and the ever so annoying sales pitches you?ve heard a thousand times from the crooked shops that line the walls.
15. The mall to some teenagers and adults is like a sanctuary, a shrine if you will, but to me it is the devils arm pit, a vast wasteland of over powering stench, muggy atmosphere and obnoxious sounds, the mall is the last place on earth I want to be.
17. I enter through the main entrance, to the right the great hall is lined with small shops selling their trequtes and trash, the is a powerful odor in the air, I look along the shops as my eyes wonder to the center of the hall where the most obnoxious sounds of kids whining, adults scurrying in an angry hurry are emanating, as I look to the left I see more shops and it dons on me that the air is strikingly muggy from the day old food from the food court, the toxic mixture of perfumes and commercial cleaners in the air the mall is obviously the last place I want to be.
10. The mall, a large hallway crowded with eager fast paced people unaware of their next destination.
11. The odor of antiperspirants wearing off lingers in the air though slightly masked by the aroma of colognes and perfumes that have been tested throughout the day.
12. The taste of commercial grade cheap cleaners hovers on your taste buds mixed with the mornings unsold goods from the food court.
13. You can cut the humidity from warm bodies moving all around you with a knife leaving you feeling sticky.
14. the nauseating sounds fill the air of crying babies, whining children, angry teenagers, and ignorant adults all around you, and the ever so annoying sales pitches you?ve heard a thousand times from the crooked shops that line the walls.
15. The mall to some teenagers and adults is like a sanctuary, a shrine if you will, but to me it is the devils arm pit, a vast wasteland of over powering stench, muggy atmosphere and obnoxious sounds, the mall is the last place on earth I want to be.
17. I enter through the main entrance, to the right the great hall is lined with small shops selling their trequtes and trash, the is a powerful odor in the air, I look along the shops as my eyes wonder to the center of the hall where the most obnoxious sounds of kids whining, adults scurrying in an angry hurry are emanating, as I look to the left I see more shops and it dons on me that the air is strikingly muggy from the day old food from the food court, the toxic mixture of perfumes and commercial cleaners in the air the mall is obviously the last place I want to be.
