I'm doing my B-school ethics essay (for admissions) and the last sentence looks funny to me. I think it needs a comma somewhere but I'm not sure.
This essay is VERY important to me. PLEASE give me a hand.
Sentence for review:
When it was time for lunch, I came to the conclusion that...
or
When it was time for lunch, I had come to the conclusion that...
This essay is VERY important to me. PLEASE give me a hand.
Sentence for review:
When it was time for lunch, I came to the conclusion that...
or
When it was time for lunch, I had come to the conclusion that...