Originally posted by: Lonyo
Originally posted by: ItmPls
Originally posted by: quakefiend420
one more then i'm out
so if i made a rap made up entirely of medical terms and long disease names and made it rhyme i would be the greatest rapper ever to walk the earth?
No. Use complex words instead of simple words but STILL MAKE SENSE. That's the whole point. It's like a 3rd grader using BAD and a 8th grader using PITIFUL. BAD is of course a more simple and commonly used word. PITIFUL goes a little further.
Do ya get what I'm saying?
I'll use the comparison I used previously. Comparing an essay of a High Schooler to a College level student. The College level student's vocabulary is larger than the High School student's. But, the College student still makes sense even though the words he chose are more complex.
Still don't get what I'm saying?
Threw some chords together
The combination D-E-F
Is who I am, is what I do
No one's gonna let it down for you
Try to focus my attention
But I feel so A-D-D
I need some help, some inspiration
(But it's not coming easily)
Whoah oh...
Trying to find the magic
Trying to write a classic
Don't you know, don't you know, don't you know?
Waste-bin full of paper
Clever rhymes, see you later
These words are my own
From my heart flown
I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you
There's no other way
To better say
I love you, I love you...
Read some Byron, Shelly and Keats
Recited in over a Hip-Hop beat
I'm having trouble saying what I mean
With dead poets and drum machines
I know I had some studio time booked
But I couldn't find a killer hook
Now you're gonna raise the bar right up
Nothing I write is ever good enough
These words are my own
From my heart flown
I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you
There's no other way
To better say
I love you, I love you...
I'm getting off my stage
The curtains pull away
No hyper bowl to hide behind
My naked soul exposes
Whoah.. oh.. oh.. oh.. Whoah.. oh..
Trying to find the magic
Trying to write a classic
Waste-bin full of paper
Clever rhymes, see you later
These words are my own
From my heart flown
I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you
There's no other way
To better say
I love you...
I love you, is that okay...?
You don't need to use big words when often little ones say it better.
Yes, that is also a song ^^ Pop though, not rap or rock or anything else, a simple, effective pop song with short words thay rhyme.