Critique my site please, tell me everything that is wrong with it and what you would change

[SCSIfreek]

Depends on your clients need. Might want to brighten up the site a little with other color combo. site does not stand out in any way but I do like the easy menu and listings (its simply) . Logo needs a face lift.

--Scsi

 

[MikeMike]

Originally posted by: Krassus
Honest opinion from someone with a half-decade of experience... it's horrible. If you're the one who design it, you should find yourself a new line of work. Sorry, but that's honestly what i thought when i saw it.

thanks, but if you read the whole thread, im 16, and i am gunna face lift the whole site. I did everything, and i know design isnt my strong point, coding would be i think.

what is wrong with it a little more detailed would be useful

 

[etalns]

Originally posted by: Dudd
I'd suggest getting rid of the ASDF stuff, personally.

 

[Krassus]

Originally posted by: nourdmrolNMT1

Originally posted by: Krassus
Honest opinion from someone with a half-decade of experience... it's horrible. If you're the one who design it, you should find yourself a new line of work. Sorry, but that's honestly what i thought when i saw it.

thanks, but if you read the whole thread, im 16, and i am gunna face lift the whole site. I did everything, and i know design isnt my strong point, coding would be i think.

what is wrong with it a little more detailed would be useful

There are too many things wrong with it. Simply put, it looks like a site from the mid-90's. Of course, the people you're making this site for probably won't realize it, but you have to stop and ask yourself whether you want to make something you'd be proud to put on your resume, or something you'll one day wish never saw the light of day, because it simply makes you look unprofessional. You can take the $250 and move on, or you can scrap the whole thing, spend a few days looking through portfolios of professionals to get an idea of what a good site should look like, and start over. It's up to you. But the market is saturated enough as it is, and if you can't make your work stand out, you'll get buried. Best of luck and remember, all it takes is patience. Most of the people that make breath-taking designs aren't extraordinary by any means. They simply took the time to master the craft.