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Dear Bob Collevechio:
I came across your job posting through my university?s career center and would like to inquire further information about your employment opportunity as a Territory Manager Trainee in Boston, MA. This position sparks a great interest because it fits exceptionally well with my background, especially in relationship management.
My work history shows proven experience in both employee management and training. As a new manager in a medium-sized restaurant with stagnant sales and unorganized work structure, I?ve developed a complete employee training program from the ground up. This has enabled the company to restructure the 11 member staff to have a customer-oriented focus. With this program I was able to maintain and promote the new company culture by working directly with the trainees as well as handling delicate staff relationships in an optimal and professional manner.
The advertised position also requires various aspects of market knowledge. The skills I possess not only meet, but will exceed your expectations. In 2003, I was solely responsible for launching and completing our establishment?s brand marketing campaign. I have formulated this campaign to stimulate our decreasing sales and it involved extensive local market research, customer survey, and target advertising. Nine months after the launch, the brand-recognition was established among the community as our reported sales were increased by twenty percent.
As I read your job description once again, I am quite excited to know more about your position. So far it seems my hands-on work experience will make me a perfect fit for this job, and I will bring my fully devoted effort and great work ethic to your company. Please look over the attached resume which provides full detail. I can be contacted me at xxx-xxx-xxxx if you have further questions.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you in the future.
Sincerely,
jeCt
Dear Bob Collevechio:
I came across your job posting through my university?s career center and would like to inquire further information about your employment opportunity as a Territory Manager Trainee in Boston, MA. This position sparks a great interest because it fits exceptionally well with my background, especially in relationship management.
My work history shows proven experience in both employee management and training. As a new manager in a medium-sized restaurant with stagnant sales and unorganized work structure, I?ve developed a complete employee training program from the ground up. This has enabled the company to restructure the 11 member staff to have a customer-oriented focus. With this program I was able to maintain and promote the new company culture by working directly with the trainees as well as handling delicate staff relationships in an optimal and professional manner.
The advertised position also requires various aspects of market knowledge. The skills I possess not only meet, but will exceed your expectations. In 2003, I was solely responsible for launching and completing our establishment?s brand marketing campaign. I have formulated this campaign to stimulate our decreasing sales and it involved extensive local market research, customer survey, and target advertising. Nine months after the launch, the brand-recognition was established among the community as our reported sales were increased by twenty percent.
As I read your job description once again, I am quite excited to know more about your position. So far it seems my hands-on work experience will make me a perfect fit for this job, and I will bring my fully devoted effort and great work ethic to your company. Please look over the attached resume which provides full detail. I can be contacted me at xxx-xxx-xxxx if you have further questions.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you in the future.
Sincerely,
jeCt
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