contructive criticism on my Resume?

[Falloutboy]

Found out about a job today that is closing tommrow so i'm rushing to get my resume updated can anyone fine any glarring errors in this one?

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[amish]

i take it you have graduated. cool. the short time that you took is good. did you do any extracurricular activities? sports, community service, or something like that?

 

[whalen]

You need to specify what degree you got, or when you expect to graduate. For GPA, you should list is as 3.6/4.0 instead of just 3.6. I also have trouble reading the resume with the font you used. It might be just me, but it looks like some of the words run together.

 

[Falloutboy]

well it was a tech school so no sports or activites, it was hard enough holding down a full time job while taking classes, also I ended up just getting an associates degree mainly because the industry I'm in its all about who you know and experence than it is about education. (both my current coworkers and my boss never attended college)

hopefully though if I get this job i'm applying for now I'll go back to school at nights a couple days a week for a few years to get my bachlors.

 

[Falloutboy]

you guys also think that stating int he section about my schooling something to the fact that I worked fulltime all through the time I was in school to make up for the fact of not any activities or is that not going to be a big deal.

Also keep in mind if I get this job its not because of my education it will most likely be from my experence specifically my current job since its basically the exact smae postion I have now but the city has more money so it actually pays what it should instead of the crappy wage I get now.