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Christmas card for my girlfriend...

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BigToque

Lifer
Angela,

Words alone cannot truly express how I feel, but
since the day we met, you have made me believe
I am the most fortunate and happiest guy in the world.

You have filled a gap and instilled in me a sense of completeness
I have not felt for many years. For this I thank you.

Merry Christmas

Stefan




Does this sound alright?
 


<< i think you meant to write completion? a typo could detract from the "moment" >>



lol... I'm a little distracted at the moment 😀



<< i hope that isnt for the angela i know >>



I don't think it is, but you never know :Q



Anyway, does it look good?
 
Sounds kinda funny at the beginning...

words can't express how you feel, then you say you made me feel... well.. there you go using words to express how you feel... make up your mind!
 


<< words can't express how you feel, then you say you made me feel... well.. there you go using words to express how you feel... make up your mind! >>



hmmm... should I just take the first line out? or modify it in some way?
 
How about modifying it to: "It's really hard for me to express to you how I feel..."

"You complete me" always works for chicks.
 


<< wow feel rhymes with feel... who would have thought? >>



Well, believe it or not, I posted it here so you guys could help me edit it and make it great.
 
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