Can anyone critique my resume?

PistachioByAzul

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Gonna apply at Gateway Country tomorrow. Think this is adequate?


objectives: ? Obtaining CCNA & MSCE certifications.

? Working as network/systems administrator.



qualifications: ? Assembled from components and configured multiple IBM compatible PC systems.

? Installed/configured and proficient in operating systems: MS DOS, Windows
9x, Windows NT Workstation 4.0, Windows 2000 Professional, Linux.

? Installed and currently administrating four system Windows
98/NT & Linux LAN. Installed/configured broadband router & switch to provide cable modem internet access across LAN.

? Basic MacOS proficiency.

? Basic HTML and C++ capabilities.


work experience: ? Genre Editor, Gamers.com
(contact info upon request)
-Wrote video game reviews.

-Participated in launch of website (http://www.gamers.com).

? Contract Network/Internet installation, APD Solutions, Inc.
(contact info upon request)
-Installed/configured office LAN.

-Installed/configured router to provide DSL (PPPoE) access over LAN.


education: ? Senior at Berkeley High Independent Studies

-Two years C++

 

seewhy

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Be a bit more specific on your work experience...for example what exactly did you do to help the launch of website, web design, setup...etc, could be valuable experience.

Also quantify result, for example, you wrote game review with how many hits/day?? Number of office computer you setup on the LAN..etc

Put stuff like working in a team, being a leader configuring the LAN...helping user to learn the technology...etc...the SOFT stuff....company likes that.

Good Luck