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manowar821

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Here is an internet classic;

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia,
poem writes you!
 

oiprocs

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Originally posted by: pontifex
i think the only "poetry" most ATOTers know is from rap songs.
posting a poetry thread in AT is like showing opera in prison.

FYI, I wrote everything I posted. So there. :inyourface;

:p
 
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Originally posted by: manowar821
Here is an internet classic;

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia,
poem writes you!

The only roses are red one I remember from the internet is:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I will fuck you with a rake

Ah, the internet. Great beacon of wisdom and insight.
 

manowar821

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Originally posted by: Atomic Playboy
Originally posted by: manowar821
Here is an internet classic;

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia,
poem writes you!

The only roses are red one I remember from the internet is:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I will fuck you with a rake

Ah, the internet. Great beacon of wisdom and insight.

hehehe
 

Perknose

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Originally posted by: oiprocs
Originally posted by: pontifex
i think the only "poetry" most ATOTers know is from rap songs.
posting a poetry thread in AT is like showing opera in prison.

FYI, I wrote everything I posted. So there. :inyourface;

:p
Which only goes to prove his second point, poetaster boy. :confused:

 

oiprocs

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Originally posted by: Perknose
Originally posted by: oiprocs
Originally posted by: pontifex
i think the only "poetry" most ATOTers know is from rap songs.
posting a poetry thread in AT is like showing opera in prison.

FYI, I wrote everything I posted. So there. :inyourface;

:p
Which only goes to prove his second point, poetaster boy. :confused:

Better check the title of the thread again. It doesn't say "ATOT Good Poetry Thread".

If every post in ATOT was expected to have some level of skill, well, there would be no ATOT.
 

CorCentral

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Originally posted by: Atomic Playboy
Originally posted by: manowar821
Here is an internet classic;

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia,
poem writes you!

The only roses are red one I remember from the internet is:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I will fuck you with a rake

Ah, the internet. Great beacon of wisdom and insight.



Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm an Insomniac
ZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzz


 

Perknose

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Originally posted by: oiprocs
Originally posted by: Perknose
Originally posted by: oiprocs
Originally posted by: pontifex
i think the only "poetry" most ATOTers know is from rap songs.
posting a poetry thread in AT is like showing opera in prison.

FYI, I wrote everything I posted. So there. :inyourface;

:p
Which only goes to prove his second point, poetaster boy. :confused:

Better check the title of the thread again. It doesn't say "ATOT Good Poetry Thread".

If every post in ATOT was expected to have some level of skill, well, there would be no ATOT.
Excellent point. :thumbsup:

 

Madwand1

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all which isn't singing is mere talking
and all talking's talking to oneself
(whether that oneself be sought or seeking
master or disciple sheep or wolf)

gush to it as deity or devil
--toss in sobs and reasons threats and smiles
name it cruel fair or blessed evil--
it is you (né i) nobody else

drive dumb mankind dizzy with haranguing
--you are deafened every mother's son--
all is merely talk which isn't singing
and all talking's to oneself alone

but the very song of (as
mountains feel and lovers)
singing is silence




e.e. cummings, 73 poems of
 

Perknose

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I love the English language, and the music inherent within it' prose, drawn tight by poetry.

I don't want to be Sisyphus. I know what I'm doing here is more akin to casting pearls before swine.

Nevertheless, instead of a smattering of the same old suspects scattered amongst personally scribbled doggerel, let me share with you the poetic genius of a Poet Laureate of the United States of America

The Revenant by Billy Collins

I am the dog you put to sleep,
as you like to call the needle of oblivion,
come back to tell you this simple thing:
I never liked you--not one bit.

When I licked your face,
I thought of biting off your nose.
When I watched you toweling yourself dry,
I wanted to leap and unman you with a snap.

I resented the way you moved,
your lack of animal grace,
the way you would sit in a chair and eat,
a napkin on your lap, knife in your hand.

I would have run away,
but I was too weak, a trick you taught me
while I was learning to sit and heel,
and--greatest of insults--shake hands without a hand.

I admit the sight of the leash
would excite me
but only because it meant I was about
to smell things you had never touched.

You do not want to believe this,
but I have no reason to lie.
I hated the car, the rubber toys,
disliked your friends and, worse, your relatives.

The jingling of my tags drove me mad.
You always scratched me in the wrong place.
All I ever wanted from you
was food and fresh water in my metal bowls.

While you slept, I watched you breathe
as the moon rose in the sky.
It took all my strength
not to raise my head and howl.

Now I am free of the collar,
the yellow raincoat, monogrammed sweater,
the absurdity of your lawn,
and that is all you need to know about this place

except what you already supposed
and are glad it did not happen sooner--
that everyone here can read and write,
the dogs in poetry, the cats and the others in prose.

 

Farang

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/In_Flanders_Fields

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved, and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.

Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.
? John McCrae
 

Perknose

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How about we bring poetry right into the 21st century?

Add One

She's five.
Wants to know
What infinity is.

I try: you take the biggest
Number, you think the last
Number there is, and you add
One more.
See?
You can always add one.
Sto then the number's
Bigger still.
Infinity means --
The numbers go on
Forever.

She thinks. Index finger raised.
Swibeling innocently Elvis-style
Hips in her big-girl jeans
And shaking her pigtails
In a trance of musing. Then

"Is it like, God is still
Alive, making numbers?"

Now, who told her -- it wasn't me!--
That God and infinity
Are spken in one breath?
That what's infinite
Must be divine?

Who, I ask you?

Deborah Garrison, from The Second Child.
 

Orsorum

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A Memory of Youth, Yeats

THE MOMENTS passed as at a play,
I had the wisdom love brings forth;
I had my share of mother wit
And yet for all that I could say,
And though I had her praise for it,
A cloud blown from the cut-throat north
Suddenly hid love?s moon away.

Believing every word I said
I praised her body and her mind
Till pride had made her eyes grow bright,
And pleasure made her cheeks grow red,
And vanity her footfall light,
Yet we, for all that praise, could find
Nothing but darkness overhead.

We sat as silent as a stone,
We knew, though she?d not said a word,
That even the best of love must die,
And had been savagely undone
Were it not that love upon the cry
Of a most ridiculous little bird
Tore from the clouds his marvellous moon.
 

Perknose

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The Pope's Penis


It hangs deep in his robes, a delicate
clapper at the center of a bell.
It moves when he moves, a ghostly fish in a
halo of silver sweaweed, the hair
swaying in the dark and the heat -- and at night
while his eyes sleep, it stands up
in praise of God.


-- Sharon Olds
 

Perknose

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Our current poet laureate:



Paradise Motel


Millions were dead; everybody was innocent.
I stayed in my room. The President
Spoke of war as of a magic love potion.
My eyes were opened in astonishment.
In a mirror my face appeared to me
Like a twice-canceled postage stamp.

I lived well, but life was awful.
there were so many soldiers that day,
So many refugees crowding the roads.
Naturally, they all vanished
With a touch of the hand.
History licked the corners of its bloody mouth.

On the pay channel, a man and a woman
Were trading hungry kisses and tearing off
Each other's clothes while I looked on
With the sound off and the room dark
Except for the screen where the color
Had too much red in it, too much pink.

-- Charles Simic


 

Orsorum

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Pebble

The pebble
is a perfect creature

equal to itself
mindful of its limits

filled exactly
with a pebbly meaning

with a scent that does not remind one of anything
does not frighten anything away does not arouse desire

its ardour and coldness
are just and full of dignity

I feel a heavy remorse
when I hold it in my hand
and its noble body
is permeated by false warmth

--Pebbles cannot be tamed
to the end they will look at us
with a calm and very clear eye
 

lightstar

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untitled


i think about you
more than i should
if i could change the past
not sure if i would

who's to say
that your path is wrong
we sing different melodies
to the same sad song

is it really enough
just to subsist
or do we need more
to prove we exist

if i choose to throw dirt
will i lose precious ground
& risk everything
that i've previously found

chorus:

hold on tight
let it go
feed the addiction
take it slow


-- Uranium Orchid
 

Kaolccips

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Originally posted by: Perknose
The Pope's Penis


It hangs deep in his robes, a delicate
clapper at the center of a bell.
It moves when he moves, a ghostly fish in a
halo of silver sweaweed, the hair
swaying in the dark and the heat -- and at night
while his eyes sleep, it stands up
in praise of God.


-- Sharon Olds

:laugh:


Originally posted by: lightstar
untitled


i think about you
more than i should
if i could change the past
not sure if i would

who's to say
that your path is wrong
we sing different melodies
to the same sad song

is it really enough
just to subsist
or do we need more
to prove we exist

if i choose to throw dirt
will i lose precious ground
& risk everything
that i've previously found

chorus:

hold on tight
let it go
feed the addiction
take it slow


-- Uranium Orchid


I likes.
 

Analog

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Fuzzy Wuzzy
was a bear,
Fuzzy Wuzzy
had no hair,
Fuzzy Wuzzy
wasn't really fuzzy,
wuzzy?
 

Orsorum

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A Man In His Life - Yehuda Amichai

A man doesn't have time in his life
to have time for everything.
He doesn't have seasons enough to have
a season for every purpose. Ecclesiastes
Was wrong about that.

A man needs to love and to hate at the same moment,
to laugh and cry with the same eyes,
with the same hands to throw stones and to gather them,
to make love in war and war in love.
And to hate and forgive and remember and forget,
to arrange and confuse, to eat and to digest
what history
takes years and years to do.

A man doesn't have time.
When he loses he seeks, when he finds
he forgets, when he forgets he loves, when he loves
he begins to forget.

And his soul is seasoned, his soul
is very professional.
Only his body remains forever
an amateur. It tries and it misses,
gets muddled, doesn't learn a thing,
drunk and blind in its pleasures
and its pains.

He will die as figs die in autumn,
Shriveled and full of himself and sweet,
the leaves growing dry on the ground,
the bare branches pointing to the place
where there's time for everything.
 

Chunkee

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Not really known for his poetry, I think he was probably one of the most accomplished authors spanning both fiction, journalism and poetry. He died very young. His use of imagery and personification, at least to me, were only rivaled by Steinbeck.

Here is some of his poetry.

http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/crane02.html

In the desert / is my favorite, but there are many others that are very sharp. He called them pills. Hemingway thought he was the shit also. Literary lesson over.

jC