Anyone wanna help with an intro to a paper?

etalns

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I got nothing. This is the best I can come up with. Any thoughts, or other methods I may want to approach it with? I'm trying to capture the readers interest, but it reads so dull in my opinion.

Far too often, in times of conflict, we resort to our most basic human instincts. Where we would otherwise use communication to solve our problems, we resort to aggression. Had President John F. Kennedy capitulated to his basic instincts, the world we know today could be radically different. The use of interpersonal communication during the Cuban missile crisis between American President John F. Kennedy, and Soviet Premier Nikitia Khrushchev was likely responsible for averting what could have otherwise been one of the most catastrophic events in human history.
 

etalns

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I don't think you guys could have made those responses any less helpful! =P
 

Cooler

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Long time ago?. in galaxy far far away?.

Research Paper :

Paragraph 1 the introduction:

In this paragraph the author will introduce

the subject of his paper. After a few generalizations

the topic will become more focus leading

to a Thesis statement at the very end. Will

the writer be able to pass off this BS in order

to receive a good grade from the dreaded

professor or will he fail.
 

darkxshade

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I'm not good at intros but let me give you a good ending:

"In conclusion, I would like to conclude that the conclusion has been concluded."