Anyone here want to read read my essay and correct it for me?

[AlphaIVT]

I'm planning on posting my essay on the presidency sometime tomorrow night but I'd like to know in advance if you'd care to read it and edit some wrongs, comments on the goods, bads, etc.

 

[Pretender]

Oh, we'll correct it.

/me cackles evilly

 

[Mday]

muwaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhahahahahahah

 

[AlphaIVT]

hm... it doesn't seem like I'm going to get any help here...

 

[apoppin]

A little constructive criticism?



You bet. Post it.



Of course this reply is in advance. (***Disclaimer***)

 

[Regine]

I'll read it and comment on it.

 

[AlphaIVT]

Yeah, you'll all comment on it, it really doesn't matter if its good or bad criticsm that I'll get.

 

[Pretender]

<< it really doesn't matter if its good or bad criticsm that I'll get. >>



Oh, it'll be good or bad criticism. Muahahahahahahaahha. Oh, by the way, cancel the 'good' from that last sentence. Muahahahaha.

 

[SKiller]

<< Anyone here want to read read my essay and correct it for me? >>



Sure, I can start right now :Q